lol videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan erasa and sharpener shouldn't have challenge us on that bet to having sex everywhere

lol videl hissing saying to sayianman erasa and sharpener better give up now there is no way they are going to keep up with us on the out of the way places where e people can have sex there is only five other females that can out sex me once i get started and the five other females are miss double d tifa gogo Marie hitana and erasa

videl hissing to gohan leave your penis inside my pussy drain your seed into my pussy

Videl to gohan next time we sneak in here naked and at night

J'aime beaucoup .

Wow ! The story was amazing , but it wouldve been better if you included the lemon .I read the other story that I think follows this .Youre a great writer ! I just loved the humour ! I really hope you write another story about Gohan and Videl . And if you do ,please do include the lemon and mabye make it 1 chapter long . Youre amazing !

Great story!

Heh, nice one-shot, kaleb. I've read and reviewed the lemon sequel to this, and have already read this.

The detail was amazing and I really like the concept and plot. Having Sharpner and Erasa have a sex location contest with Gohan and Videl is ingenious. I loved it.

Excellent one shot, kaleb.

Most "appetizing" story I've read to be honest. XD This story definitely demanded attention by taking you by the shirt and daring you to call it hot.

HaHa! Nice story!

Hahahahaha!
I just can't stop lauhahahahahahaha!
Please write another chapter. Maybe another point for their "contest".

Absolutely hilarious good job!

yeah i can totally imagine gohan and videl doing that.

Lol!

That was hawt. ;D