| Reviews for The Akatsuki |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2019 Are you kidding me? You made Tobi so weak, it's not even... Your OC is extremely Mary Sue. |
 I collect cacti chapter 1 . 3/31/2019 this is the only fanfic I have read to the end and enjoyed not only the story but the oc it's self good job it's was also supper dupper funny and good. u caught the People's personality right too 7/10 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2019 Awww I loved this story, ur oc was cool to bcuz she wasn't overpowered and seemed pretty normal, which was nice |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/19/2015 Love the Tobi hole scene. Laughed my ass off. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/6/2015 "…I'm sorry." Who's saying this? If it's Itachi-sama, he seems more like the kinda person to say 'I apologise'. Also, always put a space after any (...)s as well as a capital letter because it is the beginning of a new sentence. Put a space before and after a dash (-) as well. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2015 it was because they missed the Portkey. Missed the portkey? I thought the portkey only left when you touched it and you held on. |
| Byakusharinnegan chapter 8 . 7/4/2013 *sighs in depression* |
| Letah chapter 8 . 7/4/2013 Wait, Wait, Wait, Wait, WAIT! I think your OC just gives the story a little more of You. I don't see the corner... but ok... Everyones imagination may come to an end... It's a shame! I can only hope, that your passion for this story comes back, with some awesome ideas! Till then i wait and hope. I have all the time in the world to wait |
| Letah chapter 7 . 5/30/2013 Yai Tobi's choosen! Nice story... Think i nearly fell off my chair from laughing! KEEP ON WRITING THIS STORY! PLEASE! |
| ShiraChan-Desu chapter 7 . 5/26/2013 Oh god. Oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god! THIS IS SO AWESOME! I TOTALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! TOBI IS SERIOUSLY GOING TO KICK BUTT! -grins mischivieously- I wonder who or what Tobi has to save in the Black lake. And oh my gosh, TOBI VS DRAGON! I wonder if the innocent children are ever going to see the Akatsuki serious and totally in action. I hope so. Because I want the children to see exactly how awesome they are. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! INSTANT FAV AND FOLLOW. PS: Like the OC! :D Also, I am so glad the characters aren't OOC that much...or not at all. But anyway, thank you! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 *Goes to read, sees OC* FUCK NAW! Joking, your O.C isn't that bad compared to others. |
| Yuyumi-chan chapter 7 . 3/19/2013 update please! |
| The Another One chapter 7 . 2/2/2013 Tobi is going to kick their ass if he ever decide to get serious. oh, and by the way you do know that Tobi is actually Obito right? |
| Ali-Kun chapter 7 . 1/5/2013 UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEEEE! |
| Byakusharinnegan chapter 7 . 12/29/2012 I just thought of something. Put Tobi in, and watch in surprise as he somehow manages to escape death. Every Single Time. |
