Normally I wouldn't comment. But I totally don't agree with what you said. A victim of abuse should leave that person and file charges if necessary. Have you not read all the news/stories about abusive spouses or boyfriends murdering or at the very least causing harm to their wives/girlfriends?

Hello.

I cannot say I wholly agree with your logic regarding love and abuse, but that's not why I am here. I wanted to offer you some concrit. You asked for it.

*Let us look at this snippet from your fanfic:

Now, Ivy burst through the doors of The Stacked Deck and dashed through a door behind the bar. La Pandora saw and immediately followed after them. "The Joker?" she asked Ivy, reaching for the first aid kit. "Uh huh. She's bleeding badly," Ivy said quickly, working fast to bandage the wounds tightly, "he'd've killed her this time had I not been there". Ivy removed the tight jester's suit and lifted Harley Quinn into bed. "This is the fourth time this month Pamela," La Pandora remarked, addressing Ivy by her common name, "he is frustrated by the Batman".

- When people speak to one another, it is good practice to separate each character's lines of dialogue so that you don't have everyone talking in one great clump. Observe...

CORECTION:

"The Joker?" she asked Ivy, reaching for the first aid kit.

"Uh huh. She's bleeding badly," Ivy said quickly, working fast to bandage the wounds tightly, "he'd've killed her this time had I not been there". Ivy removed the tight jester's suit and lifted Harley Quinn into bed.

"This is the fourth time this month Pamela," La Pandora remarked, addressing Ivy by her common name, "he is frustrated by the Batman".

*And another snippet:

Harley rolled over to face Ivy, nestling her face into the red hair of her friend. "Red?" she whispered, calling Ivy's pet name, "is that you?"

-You said red twice. Redundant. Use a different word that means the same thing to avoid repetition. For example...

ALTERNATIVE:

Harley rolled over to face Ivy, nestling her face into the crimson/or/fiery/or/blazing hair of her friend. "Red?" she whispered, calling Ivy's pet name, "is that you?"

*This snippet impressed me:

Harley smiled drowsily and brushed her fingertips against the soft skin of Ivy's cheek. "You don't understand Red, no one does," she whispered, "Mister J loves me the only way he knows how. And that's okie-dokie by me."

-It's twisted, and sums up Harley's quirky madness wonderfully.

Overall a good fanfic. Now let's just hope my review's formatting doesn't go stupid.

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A little fast paced and scattered about, but an okay plot and general theme. I could be a little biased though because I'm definitely not a fan of Harley and Joker and the idea of them actually loving each other isn't plausible. Idt you needed the M rating but a very well written story nevertheless.

Finally a good take on what the ''love'' between The Joker and Harley is. Very well done. Do you really read your reviewer's stories? Because if you do, I have only a story on the Nolanized Batman and Catwoman and a crossover... : ) Sorry. But, anyway, your story is really good. Keep it up!

this was so touching and i loved it. keep creating :)

omg i ship them so hard, this hurts to much :c haha but great story! :D

Gotta hand it to the crazies. :P
I liked the writing and the story was okay.
Try writing a Harley x Ivy piece with the New 52 in mind. (Since Ivy is a good guy now it could make things interesting.)

a tragic love story.

I LIKE IT!

More Please!

sweet in a sad way. Everytime Ivy seems to be making progress, Harly does something Harlyish. Love your joker too, so perfectly insane but intelligent.

Well written, I must say. You've really got the relationship between Joker and Harley done nicelly, and its fun that you threw in Ivy as well. Maybe in the future you can use this as a foundation for a multi-chapter story.

I really liked it. It was interesting and well written. And I absolutely love Harley and Ivy. It was a pleasure reading your story. Thanks for writing it!

Please tell me there's more coming. This has a great deal of potential for some major story plot and mass murdering fun lol. Sick Joker oriented humor aside there, I will say that short story or not, I do like more details with whatever I read but this was pretty good all the same.

awesome job! i love the pairing of harley/ mista j. and to throw in poison ivy made it even better!