Well damn. Ok I think I understand everything. I mean they ended up switching, right? And They kind of did that thing with the hand at the end, right? That was really cool. It was perfect. Wow. You did a really great job, I mean, a lot of thinking and research went into this and it turned out fantastically. And you're right I did /not/ see the whole switcheroo coming. I mean I thought about the hand thing before but I wasn't sure.
The plot with Rose and the Wolf and all of that was left hanging for when you finish your novel,right?
Well this was really good and I hope more people come along and read this story to.

Whoa, hold the phone, what just happened here?
Ok. They made a copy of the original Doctor. Like an exact copy, not a human/timelord Doctor... And then they used the nano thingies to 'fix' the metacrisis Doctor? Like what happened way back when?
Or did they just kill the metacrisis Doctor and just, I don't know, gave the actual clone Doctor his memories of the metacrisis- or wait if its a clone did it keep the memories that the Doctor had at the time his DNA was 'harvested'? Ughhhhhh I don't know what's happening! You know what, I'm just gonna go ahead and read the next chapter. Like, right now.

Sorry, sorry, sorry!
I really don't have any excuses except for the fact that when something else catches my eye (or I guess my mind?) I have to go check it out and so yeah. I was watching Bones in my free time. I solved like 5 murders. Okay, but back to the story, this chapter makes the actual reader feel really important and plants the idea that this story could actually be real and that they are the ones 'watching' Jack and River. I loveee it when authors do this. This chapter also goes into the 'what if' part. And then how our small actions can affect big things like, oh I don't know, /the universe/? So you make the reader feel both significant and insignificant at the same time. Really, really great job. Plus I like the idea of the jobs with the capital letters.
However, with all this awesome psychology mumbo jumbo, I still can't quite figure out what the MetaCrisis Doctor's plan is.

Whoops. Sorry I didn't review yesterday. I wasted the day reading "Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children". Literally wasted. I'll tell you right now that if you havn't read it yet, don't bother. The author didn't even /try/ to make it frightening. Or interesting. Or credible. But what am I doin reviewing that here, that's what GoodReads is for, right? Anyways the theories I thought were hopeless two chapters ago are beggining to seem possible again. Yay. And while I never really liked River, the idea of her and Jack doing something together is probably one of the best things I've ever heard. Off to the next chapter. And the next book.

You know, Jack has got to be the yummiest man in the entire series. You know what, make that in the entire universe. Hmmm.
And you portrayed him perfectly, right down to the bit with Allonso.

What.
I do not understand the whole 'my mom was a human' thing. Does he mean in terms of the metacrisis' conception? Like Donna would be the mom b/c he has some of her DNA and she's human or like original I'm bedrocking on Galifrey conception? And my mind pretty much stayed on that topic for the rest of the chapter and now I still don't understand what's going on and how on earth is River going to beable to help him. And how there even is a River in this parallel world. Or is that why they used the canon? Yeah. I'm not to sure on any of my theories anymore, that's for sure.

Wow what woah. So okay what is happening? I am honestly just feeling that the whole point of going to the real doctor as he regenerates is to fix Tentoo cos he's about to burn up like Donna, but I'm not sure if the same thing is happening here. The part where Fred was practically dying though. Pete is just like you go ahead and do whatever your doing and I'm just gonna read these pamphlets, and the scientist dude is just like yeah carry on guys I won't interrupt anything and Rose is just freaking out trying to get a cuppa. I thought it was all just a little weird but at least he got better? Yay for Ood Sigma. He's like one of my favorite characters.
Oh and I'm back.

Mmkay so cute 'Meta crisis Doctor having to deal with being human' aside, the Ood?! Okay so there's the DoctorDonna bit, the crazy prolouge (which did indeed mention the Ood song), and Rose's weird dream. All of them except the latter seem to be related. I mean maybe the Ood are gonna tell Tentoo and Rose to travel to right before proper Doctor regenerates. You know, I don't usually review until the latest chapter, usually with a guess on what's going to happen next or just a 'thanks for posting' kind of thing but this story is the bomb diggity and so maybe if people see the number of reviews they'll start reading to. Fingers crossed. Oh one other thing, going back to the part about Tentoo having to cope with his humanity, what is up with the headaches? Like honestly, it's got me more excited than Rose's dream! I know that's probably not your intent, but I can't help it. And now I'll have to wait a week to see what happens with everything because I'm leaving for a week to a place with no Internet connection. Ugh.
Sorry for rambling.
Good luck with your novel.

Well Rose is officially the Queen of mixed feelings. I literally feel bad for the meta crisis Doctor. I mean you can't even call him 'Doctor'. But relationship issues aside, what is up with that dream? It keeps popping up and for some reason I feel like it will end up having something to do with that switcheroo thing they did in the prologue. Yay.

What? Please tell me this is a glitch on my phone, how does this story only have three reviews? The first chapter alone has me squirming with an overload of feels. One question though; the meta crisis Doctor traded places with the Time Lord Doctor? Is that what just happened?

Please, for the love of god tell me you're writing more!

I want to find out if the Doctor they saved at the end can grow old with Rose, even having two hearts!

I need to find out about Jack and River D:

Please write more!

that was wonderful and lovely and perfect and all wibbly-like. LOVED IT!

I really hope to see more from ya!

Oh, this is amazingly exciting! So well written and with such promise! Can't wait to read on.