this was so good! I loved reading it! i just wish there was a continuation to this

Sequel!Sequel!SEQUEL!plz

my... god... you really need to add more I've been reading fan fic about soul and maka all day but this one tops them all I really need to read more. ps I love how the story line played out XD

Hmmmm... your OC is the first OC I ont charade yer wasn't over dramatic and a tually ended being really cool. And the type of guy Mama could fall for. So thank you for making a cool OC that's not an over dramatized jerk. Sometimes OCs can really ruin the story. So yet again thanks for this cool one. _

Haha, love it all. Consistant characterisation, that's what it is.

love it! and the important one is they not ooc at all.. i can see that thing can happen between them

I have to say, I won't expecting a good story. idk why haha But wow, I really loved it. That was not OOC, I could imagine it really happening. I like the way you wrote, was very good. ugh, I'm so bad with words, anyway, keep up with the good work!

this needs a continuation and maka need some of the blame too...

I love this! :-)

asdfghjkl. asdfghjkl. That was pretty darn epic. I love Soul and Maka's spat; it seems so fast-paced and I enjoyed reading about them shouting. And now that I read that again I sound kind of... weird...

Anyway. Nathan has pretty good advice, methinks. And yeah, compared to how much Soul said, he definitely says too much. XD

Nice oneshot!

They never kissed but other than that it was fine X)

...can you please make a sequel? This is so good. Even if clueless Maka doesn't get it.

I LOVED THIS. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Great job on the story, very good ending too!

Maka's to oblivious to body language that she didn't see Souls jealousy :P