It quite honestly turned me on. I’m horny now.

that was really hot and both of them were really in character but I dont think Ginny would have invited him in like that unless they were dating.

Wow

Blood came out?

brilliant...makes you wonder what happens AFTER dinner ;)

Wow, that really good. A wonderful lemon that needs to be read. I loved the Harry naughtiness, as well as Ginny's reaction to him spying on her. I'd have to say that worked out as well as possible for him, and her of course. I'll just tell you straight out, there's no lack of skills when it comes to you and writing lemons. Your descriptions were great, your content was erotic, while also quite provocative, and your story was actually based in logic. Like Harry and Ginny, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great work!

Not bad, but I want new story fo SHADE. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee eeee

Not bad, I'd have to say. However, you do realize that Ginny's 14, right?

i thought it was pretty good

You are my hero. You're fighting for what you beleive! And, that was a lovely lemon. Congrats!

It was very well written. Good job for a first attempt.

Cosmyk

I thought this was good & steamy, and not too crude. Your A/Ns tell me you like to live dangerously, but then again I've read worse than this on this site. I just find it hard to believe that they took down the previous version of this because of your warning? Go figure...I would've thought that would help protect you a bit in this case.

Great story. Keep up with a another page and maybe more on the way.

Resistance! No autoritarism! Viva la revolucion!
I'm with you, sister (or brother, I dunno)! Lemon away.
I don't about the sex, but Ginny masturbating was kind of sexy. Yep, it sure was. I would love for that scene to be part of a bigger story, a bigger plot with a lot of chapter and sexual tension. And romance, why not.

Yum, nice and hot, I'm sure they both built up quite an appetite. Molly was probaby very pleased that they ate so much. A very good lemon.