Reviews for Dinner Time
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
It quite honestly turned me on. I’m horny now.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2017
that was really hot and both of them were really in character but I dont think Ginny would have invited him in like that unless they were dating.
nayin17 chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
blood chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
Blood came out?
gotye chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
brilliant...makes you wonder what happens AFTER dinner ;)
PotterMichael chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Wow, that really good. A wonderful lemon that needs to be read. I loved the Harry naughtiness, as well as Ginny's reaction to him spying on her. I'd have to say that worked out as well as possible for him, and her of course. I'll just tell you straight out, there's no lack of skills when it comes to you and writing lemons. Your descriptions were great, your content was erotic, while also quite provocative, and your story was actually based in logic. Like Harry and Ginny, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great work!
dzbegoun chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Not bad, but I want new story fo SHADE. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee eeee
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Not bad, I'd have to say. However, you do realize that Ginny's 14, right?
jayburly chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
i thought it was pretty good
Julius Marino chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
You are my hero. You're fighting for what you beleive! And, that was a lovely lemon. Congrats!
Cosmyk Angel chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
It was very well written. Good job for a first attempt.

Stephanie O chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I thought this was good & steamy, and not too crude. Your A/Ns tell me you like to live dangerously, but then again I've read worse than this on this site. I just find it hard to believe that they took down the previous version of this because of your warning? Go figure...I would've thought that would help protect you a bit in this case.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Great story. Keep up with a another page and maybe more on the way.
Y chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Resistance! No autoritarism! Viva la revolucion!
I'm with you, sister (or brother, I dunno)! Lemon away.
I don't about the sex, but Ginny masturbating was kind of sexy. Yep, it sure was. I would love for that scene to be part of a bigger story, a bigger plot with a lot of chapter and sexual tension. And romance, why not.
pettybureaucrat chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Yum, nice and hot, I'm sure they both built up quite an appetite. Molly was probaby very pleased that they ate so much. A very good lemon.
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