Loved this story. Wish it was longer.

I don't mind as a different character but him as Bella's husband is a bit weird. LOL.

Is Charlie CJ’s father? If so thats just weird.

hi i just find your story, and i have to say i loved CJ! you have done a great job here!
thanks for write!

That's so gross, Charlie is her dad, you cant use him as her love interest!

this was a very cute story I Loved it.

I like this story, I'm not good at reviews even though I read lots of fanfiction so I know when one is going in a good direction-.

Really good

This was a really sweet story. Charlie being Bella's hubby didn't bother me, nor did did the military/basketball inaccuracies. It did feel like it just suddenly ended. I really would have liked to see more happen between everyone. How does CJ do with a basketball team? How does Bella deal with Edward's new fame? Things like that.

Loved it!

This is a great story. I wish it were longer, that is how great I believe it is. You did a very good job and I look forward to reading more of your works.

I really like this, I just feel like it's a bit incomplete. I'd love to have had more, just more of B & E together in a real relationship and more CJ & E, even a longer epilouge would have been better if it shown more of their lives together. But overall it was a great story

I read this all in one go and i have to say that... I loved it. Cj was gorgeous.

Can't wait to read more of your stories!

I am sad that this is the end. I am going to miss this story