I would like to see this story continued. It has a lot of potential and I love the pairings

Typically not a fan of AU but this was very interesting. Nice work

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Isn't this stolen? All you did was change the names...I'm quite sure I read this somewhere else

What the heck does that last little snippet even mean?! Argh, so much cliffhanger, no like. So who are the two mixed breeds? Since Naraku is already accounted for. Sigh. Would you be interested in making a short epilogue that says what happens?

There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. You might want to consider editing it or having someone Beta it.

c'mon chapter 4 this is a great story !

I absolutely love this story, it's one of my favs I wish there was more to read

Ohh Myy Goshhh you're killing me here this story is so awesome it's like a movie, better than Blood and Chocolate (seen that before)? The suspense is something serious you can't start such a great story like this and after e chapters and a couple of years and not come back wow! I can literally picture every single scene I really truly hope you come back and update this is way too good to not be completed and Bankotsu isn't dead?! Sounds like he's going to be nursed back to health and possibly made an Alpha of the east? How better yet when is Kagome going to give in to Inuyasha and get over she was bested by a beta lol? I'm sending a PM too this story is so in need of continuing lol. Great beginning I hope you come back and complete it, looking forward to it.

This interested me to keep reading. Though the way you gave the info on the purebreds and what not are a bit clique. I wish you had done it in another fashion.

that was pretty cool

C ool story. Do another 3 parter to sequel this!

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Great story!

One question though, was this the end or is there a sequel of some kind? I just wasn't sure