God, I need to start writing again. Been away for so goddamn long.

On another note, wonderful job. Currently one of the only decent fics I've read in say, three months. All the new stories seem to lower in quality.

Now to tear it apart like the terrible person I am.

1. I can't stand when someone puts an "!" and it isn't when someone is speaking. It makes the writing seem childish and less of a third person view.

Well shit, you got lucky. I didn't actually see anything else worth pointing out.

Write on,
Professor Pajamas

I was interested from start to finish! Amazing job and JUST how I would imagine something like this to go down!

That was an excellent light read. It makes you want to keep reading more but at the same time the reader feels satisfied in the end. Well at least thats what I feel. I feel satisfied. That was very good considering it was your first Haruhi fic...I encourage you to right more for this section.

That was a good read! You're a good writer. I hope you do more Haruhi FF's. ]

It seemed a bit quick, remember that this fic takes place over less than a day. Also I'd suggest not using Japanese words unless there really isn't an English equivalent and Nagato is (allegedly) a year younger than Haruhi. Don't want to criticize but it can help.

Best. Fanfic. Ever!

Loved it. Add another chapter please!

Very good story! You captured very well the tension suffered by Haruhi to Kyon. You would have to continue the fanfic or write other fanfics on Haruhi Suzumiya.

Wow, certainly we all love when tsundere girls can finally talk about what they feel. It was actually a pretty good reading since you said it's your first time in Haruhi Series. I would imagine a situacion more like "be my boyfriend" and that's all, like if she would ever ask his opinion about anything right? xD... Nice work.