Reviews for Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Adorably heartfelt. Poor Neal, so scared about loosing Peter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, that was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, awesome! Neal's emotions absolutely well written. I'm glad Peter didn't go on that plane! Thanks for the story! Keep writing, I'm a sucker for Peter & Neal! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you broke my heart with this story, Pokey. Neal was so devastated about the dreams he couldn't even remember because he wanted to keep whatever caused the nightmares from happening. And while Peter was willing to help, he didn't really believe his sleep-deprived CI - and I can surely see why. This whole thing certainly took a toll on them both, what with the weeks this went on and on, and when Neal finally remembered and told El, she was understandably terrified for her husband. I really liked the scene with Peter entering Neal's aparment at June's after the accident on the plane. How the younger man had broken things because he felt devastated and miserable about Peter's probable demise and the FBI agent had tried to comfort him. Until they both hugged the stuffing out of each other and cried together. *smiles happily* Fabulous idea, BTW to have Peter and El invite Neal over and then calling in sick the next day at work, so they could get rib-roaring drunk - the occasion certainly called for it! LOL at Peter's "didn't notice" speaking about the chaos in Neal's apartment. Truly well done and thoughtout, Pokey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting but very moving story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! Congratulations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice I like it. :-) Angst with no physical harm, and our boys in full bromance mode, that's the perfect formula. |
![]() ![]() ![]() creepy! reminds me of the Sandra Bullock movie "Premonition" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice idea. Kind of supernatural! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting premise. I really loved how each of them needed close physical contact to ground them, to soothe their fear, to comfort eachother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sad but I liked it. JeanneZ84 |