Needs work. The flow/pacing is way too fast. Not enough information in background things and events.

Great story a shame you gave up on it

J'aime bien est-ce que Hinata serait dans le harem ?

I am looking forward to chapter 7 and I hope Naruto has sex with Anko.

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP)!

R

Please, please, please update SOON!

Damn I was hoping to see a fight. And Tora to be an available character along with this version of naruto.

P.S. the style of the fight is difficult to describe without messing up to explain what it is.

Cool. Can't wait for more.

Sweet story, but please update this story.

While I like this fic I have to say that its a shame that you haven't updated this fanfic and also there are a few suggestions I have for you the first would be having anko appear as the backup and then after naruto thrashes zabuza and knocks out haku and releases all his anger at gato from earlier frustrations and then afterward torture anko till he gets the reason why she left and then have him release her heal her make her feel really guilty then have her apologise to him and then add her to his from what I can see harem.
And there are no other suggestions so yeah...
Keep up the good work.

Hope you can finish the story cause it really is a good story. I like the fact that you made Naruto stronger and smarter and I hope you keep it that way

Enough of that ramen shit asshole!

Will anko be in the harem

Shove it up your ass you filthy Kishimoto loving piece of shit.

And shove that ramen shit up your ass too.