This is a good example of fanfiction! Others I have read have been rubbish. Well done!

Two years?! Two years and you haven't updated this amazing story? *Starts throwing shoes, paper balls and pillows* I must know how this ends! Please update soon!

it was a great story

I just read this whole fanfic, it was so cute! I showed it to my friend and she thought it was great :) Being a Ghost Adventures fan myself, this was fantastic!

WOW! What an ending! Yay! Zak finally kissed her and sees that she can save him! *happy dance* Now she just needs to be saved...

OOOOOH CREEPYYYYYY! I'm grinning like a maniac cuz I'm so excited about what's gonna happen next!

Good starting chapter :) and the Zak POV sounds just like him! :D Very well done! I'm excited to keep reading the rest.

This is awesome! I couldn't believe it when I read that this is your
first story. It's really good!

Thank you for a wonderful story and I look forward to continue reading TFB! Awesome work!

Loved it! This was an awesome chapter! What a great writer you are and I am very glad you chose to continue the story! Thank you!

Love love loved Zak's "grand" entrance! The kiss was perfection! Cliffhanger ending, got to love them!

yay! A middle of the night crazy meeting! Cant wait to see how this turns out!

Love the festival scene, it sounds fantastic! I knew this was coming with Luke, but I hope he will one day understand that she doesnt love him that way! Even though it was sad I really liked the sad part that she kept looking for him to come in every time she heard the door open, it seemed so real because I would have done the same thing!

sooooo sad! I have a suspicion they are not threw yet though!

Great chapter! I cried at Mary being able to cross over and I loved the nod to JFK!