Reviews for The Traitor Returns
Purestrongpoem chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Great start.
Fireplait chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Really interested to see things from this angle. Good choice!
Ember chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I've been thinking about doing something like this for ages and never got around to it - but I'm sort of glad that I didn't because this is really good! You've done a much better job than I imagine I would have!
xXNotInUseXx chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Yes! Like Donna, exactly.

I LOVE this! Kurda gets to live! I really can't wait to see what happens next!
SweetLittleOldLady chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
A wonderful, original idea which still has a real connection to the books. Keep up the good work!
emptyboxes chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Very original!

That's a great idea, and I accually thought about it too, so I'm glad you׳re writing it.

Perfectly written.

Please continue!

The a person
The Vampire Avatar chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
NO! As Harkat's protector I must admit-this is sad...

Wait, I just realized something...

We pretty much protect the same person...Weird...

ANYWAY.

This is pretty good :) I can't wait to see where it goes.
The Vampaneze Lady chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I'm being Noble like Donna! ( is AWESOME! xD)

You and your cup of general have done Kurda proud-as that was just awesome!

Kurda. and...Harkat..and...IT WAS TOO AMAZINGLY JEPIC! :D

The Desmeister knew that would happen all along, huh? If he thinks hes so awesome then lets see what he does without any lip balm for an entire day! xP

Update soon? :)