Ha! XD Oh Thor... XD

I think this story is great and would be a fantastic start to a series!

You should honestly do that!

Have you posted any stories of this series? I see a few other Thor fics from you, but I am uncertain if they are loosely connected or if they are just other stories of yours.

PLEASE make it into a series, I loved it. Thor and Loki have big chemistry, I think a series would be amazing so you should definitely start writing more. You have done good: 3

yes, do it, for god's sake! Loki is blocking his own cock, the son of a bitch...

great :)

Oh Loki, I love how you try to find some way to use Thor's feelings for some devious scheme. Of course Loki would control their relationship; he would convince his brother to partake in a secret.

I love how you write these two. One of your stories was actually the first I had read for this pairing.

OMG! THAT... THAT WAS SOME KIND OF HOT! NOT ONLY THAT, BUT I THINK MY HEART BURST BECAUSE OF THE PAIN I FELT! SO MUCH EMOTION AND SO MUCH DESCRIPTION! UGH I LOVE IT! I almost cried and it REALLY hurt me when they argued and when Thor was doing that to the women when he really wanted Loki! *cries on your shoulder* B-but it was beautiful... it was so beautiful! PLEASE! PLEASE, IT WAS ONE OF THE MOST ENJOYABLE AND WELL WRITTEN STORIES EVERY, PLEASE MAKE MORE SQUEALS TO THIS! I JUST CANT BARE THE THOUGHT OF IT NOT CONTINUING! IT WAS JUST TO GOOD FOR IT NOT TOO! PLEASE, CONTINUE IT AND I SHALL READ! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BRINGING US READERS PLEASURE LIKE THIS! YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER AND HAVE SO MUCH TALENT! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE AND MAKE MORE FOR THIS STORY! THANK YOU SO MUCH! *Huggles you tightly* UGH! THE SWEETNESS IS KILLING ME!

This is great.
Yes, you should make other several stories. :)

ahhhhh! I've got a nosebleed...
Oh, that charging Loki! And poor poor silly Thor XD
Just don't stop doing that ;)

its an amazing story you should make it into a series of connected stories... Please?

I won't deny that I found this rather hot.

I guess that makes me a pervert.

But it doesn't help that it was written most expertly!

Please write more!

I would love for you to write more of this! there is so much you could do! you're a very detailed writer, this is very nice.

I really really liked the story and love your idea of more. Please!