Reviews for This Year's Girl
xFlipJamsx chapter 12 . 6/21/2014
please update the story
awceagle chapter 12 . 2/18/2013
I like the story. But I find it a little hard to stay enthused with the plot. Plus I found a typo in which you state constellation, in stead of consolation, as in consoling.

I am interested in how you will continue this story, and I am surprised by tue length of your absence, do you have some sort of writer's block? Or is it because of school?

Of it helps at all, I find your story agreeable as an AU story in that you have Katara suffer amnesia, and that it now proves a serious challenge for her relationship with Zuko. Do you have a clear idea of what is going to happen a few chapters ahead, or perhaps even half a dozen if you wish to continue that far?

Because by eliminating Hahn you have removed the potential of a love triangle between K, Z and H (Katara, Zuko and Hahn), unless you choose to reintroduce him back into the story.

Second of all, by introducing Ursa with her wonderful gift of healing mental ailments, you open the possibility of introducing Azula. Do you understand Azula's character enough to use her effectively in the story? Is she to be a strong character? (Which, by the way, I think that the producers of the Avatar series did a great injustice to Azula. In which they built her up so much that I felt by making go crazy, made her into a very pathetic character.) From what I know about A, is that she is very much her father's daughter and took up much of his example, in being cunning, manipulative and very much goal oriented. We only see glimpses of her showing genuine emotion, when she was betrayed by her close friends, when she was at the Western Air Temple when she faced the reality of Zuko's betrayal, or when Zuko confronted her giving him the credit of defeating the avatar at Ba Sing Se. Ultimately, Azula was an undeveloped character in that regard.
FlyingTurtleduck chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
I thought she was going to smash down the infirmary before crying and stuff... She didn't knock out ANYONE! Not even Sokka! What the hell?
Peachie-Trishie chapter 12 . 8/21/2012
In the Spirit World, Aang would've understood why they kept him a secret from Katara, I wish Katara wasn't so angry at them for trying to protect her. :(
Upload soon please!
patty cake rocks chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
awww... poor tara... I hope things get better soon D:
alli2345 chapter 11 . 8/2/2012
I loved this chapter. Good job!
Alanna-Banana1987 chapter 11 . 8/1/2012
I kind of don't like the fact that Ursa took away Katara's newer memories. What happens when Zuko and Katara return to the Fire Nation and everyone is like "Oh you got your memories back!" Sigh.
Peachie-Trishie chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
That was hot. LOL
Update soon!
patty cake rocks chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
sweeeeeeeeeeet her memories are restored. can't wait for her to wake up and the other's reactions to when they see her with restored memories and stuff :P
Isabella chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
Wow! this is a great story! i really enjoyed reading this! cant wait to see what happens next! please update soon!
authoresque chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
oh my goodness this is so gooooooooood :D
alli2345 chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
So cute! I loved this chapter!
patty cake rocks chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
awwwwwwwwwwwwww the ending was so cuteeee. On the other hand, Sokka sokka sokka... tsk tsk tsk you really talk about food in that letter wow... xD awesome chapter :3
Peachie-Trishie chapter 10 . 7/25/2012
I LOVE THE LAST SCENE! PLEASE UPLOAD SOON!
Alanna-Banana1987 chapter 9 . 7/24/2012
AHHHHHH! I am so excited to read the next chapter! What will Katara do? What about Uncle Iroh? Will Zuko be angry at Iroh or... PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ keep writing!
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