The story is great. I'll admit the final fight of this story wasn't quit as good your others, but overall everything else was great. I liked the part where Peter and Eddie made up and finally took down the symbiote and the little appeance of Marvel's favorite fourth wall breaker. I think you did a great job with this serious.

Finally, its here. I've been waiting for weeks on this

Hello? Still waiting for the ending?

I have to say its very impressive. I'm loving the story and I'm looking forward to see how it ends. Please finish this story, it deserves an ending. Also make Mary Jane rename herself as Spider-Woman and she and Peter became a couple.

Please give it an ending

I like this story a lot. I just worry there are to many points of views competing for each other. Makes it hard to follow what's happening.

Nice chapter! I vote for Peter working with Sable, Liz, and Jubilee. Since all three have kissed Peter, you just know there would be tension among them with poor Peter caught in the middle! (lol)

Keep it up! :)

Can I offer a idea for a scene? Say when Firestar sees Peter for the first time she is angry at him leaving her. Anyway she grabs him by the ear and takes him into another room and closes the door. All the other heroes hear is Liz yelling and hitting and smackings going on! Don't you find that funny? I know I do! :)

The gang is all coming together! Do you think you can do a scene later on where Sable can't stand not knowing who Spider-Man is and jumps him and unmasks him? I would love to see that! Please! :D

Update soon please!