LOL! Its amazing what a stick of incense can do! I loved this version of events! (In the live action movies/director's cut of the anime - I don't remember which...- the ending left something to be desired. It sounds like you've seen it and had the same commitment issues crop up in your conscience too.) I love that there is a reconciliation of the two halves of Kenshin.
Great work!
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wonderful!~~'

i loved this its so cute. you should make more stories. this was an awesome one.

This is amazing! I love it! I love battousai haha he's more passionate than the rurouni

Cute!

Although yes, I was really hoping saito was included here

Oh I loved yor fic. Keep up the good work girl!

Just found this story, and I don't think it's quite as Ooc as you think. Not bad

Aww. So cute:3 I loved this soo much! You are an excellent author:)

i love this fanfic. i always read it when i want some B?K romance

That was a good story!

I liked it.

Good job!

I read this ages ago and recently rediscovered this story. I enjoyed your take on the darker side of Kenshin and I liked how each half of his personality distrusted the aspects of his other half not to hurt Kaoru. Still fun and sweet after all these years.

I cant believe I missed this fic whenever I searched for old completed wrk, well better late then never and btw the fic was great Though this fic was somewhat familiar

I just found this story, read it, and found it to be beautiful. Thank you for such a wonderful tale.

I liked this, but every once in a while you were missing words to make the sentence make sense.

It was good, but honestly, it's not very wise to use so many Japanese words if you are unfamiliar with the language. You used a lot of unimportant words like "iie" and "demo", but left out the more important ones like "de gozaru" and "sessha" (Kenshin never goes back and forth between "I" and "sessha", which is what you did. It's really inconsistent).

Good morning is spelled "ohayou" by the way, not "ohiyo".