I love this! Your a fantastic writer, and I love how it continues the "Rags" plot instead of dropping the original material from the movie entirely. I SO hope that Charlie and Kadee's romance will continue? Maybe Cam will be like a sister to them? Hmmmmm? Haha I look forward to reading more, keep on being supah dupa dope!
xo Erika

First, I want to say thanks for adding me to your Author Alerts. That really meant a lot to me; no lie! Second, I WANT MORE OF THIS STORY! And you did a great job with this chapter! Don't put yourself down like that. On a side note, There were a couple mistakes, maybe just one, in the chapter. Other than that, everything was wonderful. I loved how Charlie became nervous when speaking to Cam! :)

Aw! I hope that Cam is able to live. And such a brave thing Charlie did, rescuing her like that while the people just keep walking by like she wasn't worth their time. It makes me feel ashamed to be a human sometimes and also want to smack every last one of them for being emotionless. Love the story! Keep it up!

This was by far one of the best prologue a I've read. It pulled at my heart strings and was wonderful! As for grammar and other things, you did an amazing job. Keep up the good work! I expect great things from this story.

love it this story is so awesome

This is turning into a really great story! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

You need to give this character a name. Other than that, I like it so far. Your summary is really what drawed me in. So, I will compliment that.

amazing

You should write more the story is at the climax you can't stop now

I'm begging you to PLEASE update REALLY soon! I need to know if the girl is okay! Please please please update REALLY soon! I am following the story, so I will be checking my email every hour! Amazing job by the way! ;)

Dude... There are no words. Just amazing! I think I'm gonna write a Charlie/Oc story too. Or maybe a gender-bender version? Or both? XD I know, I'm crazy.
But back to you. This is honestly beautiful. I love deep love and stuff, but I am a sap for sappy romantic stuff too. This is really well-written. Please update soon! I'm on a be checking my email every hour or so for it!

I'd like to see where this story goes. I like it.

Ohhhh update this. Its really good so far!

Lol. Sad, cool, and funny :) great update!

...UPDATE SOON! I need to know what happens next! :D