BEST. YAOI. EVER. Ladies and gentlemen...I’m speechless. In my years reading naruto fanfic on here, and even just yaoi in general, I’m stunned. The writing, first off is phenomenal. Maybe I’m biased, as I’m a haiku fanboy and I love a nice spicy hakunaru pairing, but really it was great. You did a good job of painting the picture for the reader. I love the KibaSasu in the background and I think it fkn hilarious. Most impressive though, is the fact that as a horny teenage straight man, you were somehow erotic enough to get me turned on despite the gay shit. To be fair though, Haku is pretty fuckin cute...I would smash.

Implied ZabuzaxHaku? And sexual? Fuck this.

Tjid is one of my most favourite storys.

Please please update...

This ending was bullshit.

Hi loved your story (as usual actually) I've been reading Naruto fanfiction for a long time, probably 4-5 years and I've never even considered any other pairing besides Naruto and Sasuke in the yaoi genre. But because I wanted to read more of your works so I thought I'd give it a go. And it was so captivating. I don't read angst generally cuz I get so immersed in it that I feel everything they feel and the intensity leaves me sad and just way too emotional. But this story was a little different. Till
The last paragraph, I couldn't exactly consider the idea of Naruto and haku as a forever even though I loved them together. I don't know why, which is why when Naruto decided on ending things with Sasuke and pursuing Haku, I was a little surprised but it seemed fitting. He was always there for Naruto and he understood him and Naruto actually felt something for him which is in fact a wonder because Sasuke is just such a big part of Naruto's life that for anyone to make Naruto forget about him is definitely worth a lot. This story was also different in the way that Naruto while being himself is shown in a way that his actions can be considered as him having less maturity while some other author should have shown it in a different light because it's so easy to see him as a Hokage yet looked from a different perspective , it's not. That's what fascinated me. And Kiba, wow! You just gave him a new depth that I never really considered. Admittedly, the idea of sasuke and kiba was hard to digest because I honest can't see him with anyone other than Naruto, not because of the emotional aspect, but just because of the sorta person he is.

I wrote all this to try explain why I really want to know more about Haku and Naruto. Their story still feels a little incomplete because they've never been together without the shadow of Sasuke. But now it's almost like part one was completed and the second part of their story can begin - of how Naruto actively and singlehandedly pursues Haku. Maybe it might take him years to find him. By then he's probably matured enough to handle the mantle of being the Hokage but it was never be enough without Haku by his side. At least that's how I see this story progressing. So I really really wish that you write a sequel for this one cuz it has such potential! It's a lovely story and I would absolutely love to read what happens next with them :). Hopefully I conveyed it all in this (long-ass) review :p.

Fuck! This fic was good. Not usually a fan of anything apart from my OTP but man this is amazing.

I kinda put off reading this story cause it wasn't my otp but it was still incredible! The ending was unusual but it fits the plot of the story so I feel quite satisfied, still hoping for the Kibasasu spin-off tho lol.

Your story is getting a lot of hate from these weirdos but I hope you know that your story is wonderful and that your writing is amazing!

You did something that some writers do that annoys the shite out of me. You wasted my fucking time.

i kinda want a sequal but im not greedy. i love hopeful ending

UGH one of those "I cheated on you and fucked this other guy, but we still SO iN love because...reasons!" Stories. I have no hope for the squeal because Haku going to magically be ok with Naruto fucking Sasuke or there is going to be this corny "His conflicted/WILL they get together Again(yes)".

Wow...This is better than the actual Naruto Script. 100/10...Just blew me away.

This is the first Yaoi I thought was good. It was avoid all my pet peeves for a while, until the end where out of a sudden everyone is gay, which is fucking stupid, it felt like someone justifying themselves, and that was completely unnecessary.

Haku leaving is a breath of fresh air, as romances that split up are a rarity in all fanfiction.

The whole Sasuke situation made my face stuck in a frown. I know they have a history in canon, but still Sasuke read like a total creep. It's a pet peeve of mine, someone feeling someone else is their possession. It makes me go what the fuck every time.

So much WIN! This is by far the best Fiction i have read in a long time, hell, best NaruHaku yaoi pairing fiction i have EVER read!

Expertly written, well thought out plot, good conflict, awesome romance, overwhelmingly emotion filled, so much emotion filled that i actually thought i heard my heartstrings being broken near the end Q_Q. And to be truthful i wasn't having my expectations so high for this fic but once i started reading it, i couldn't stop and now its 2:30 in the morning and i have no regrets!

As weird as it sounds to say this, since i'm a straight guy, i absolutely LOVE NaruHaku yaoi, well that and just NaruHaku in general and i guess it's because i associate Haku with girls more than guys i guess? But then there's the rare NaruSasu pairing fic's that are really good and i like those too but whatever, at least when i look at a girl i can say: "I like that.". Ok maybe not in those words but you get my point.

Anyway, i love this little piece of fiction and can't get enough of it and i scream internally when i think i find a good NaruHaku fic but then it turns out to have atrocious grammar, plot could use a ton of work, romance happens way too fast, and dialogue could be a lot better for some.

I absolutely hate that and yes, i know this is a fanfiction site and everything but when i see good, promising summaries but the end product isn't up to snuff? Yeah, i will NOT be a very happy camper. I mean i love the ideas they have for that pairing when i read it and i like that way it all unravels and happy endings for all and everything and i can stand up to at least two of the above things but if they all happen... yeah... again, not a happy camper.

Sorry for all the rambling and everything XD. So down to the point... i LOVE this fiction and i plan on reading some of your other works, i also can't wait for the sequel to this :D i also would like to expect maybe other NaruHaku fictions in the future?

Anyway, long review i know and i thank you for taking the time to read this ramble made of stuff that may or may not be of relevance XD, again, love this fiction and can't wait for the sequel.

Sincerely, TheFunnyMoneky.

This is an awesome story, first Naru-Haku i ever read and i enjoyed it tremendously.