I love that Jake is gay. I hate it when stories make him a bad guy and he’s not, so your Jake is perfect!

Thank you for writing this story and sharing this lovely family’s life with us. I thoroughly enjoyed seeing Edward develop into the kind and loving husband and father he always wanted to be. I’m a big fan of your writing style and look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you 3

I loved reading this story and progression it took! I loved that Edward and Bella adopted as well as had kids. And just everything about this was so lovely, thank you for writing and sharing it.

Beautiful story, wish there was a sequel.

Great story. Enjoyed it a second time. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg

Really enjoyed this writing good stuff.

Well there are certainly some grammar issues. Like, "I don't want them waiting dinner for me. . . " Does that sound right to you? It may be a regional thing, but it sounds weird. And there's so many other ways to say it. I don't want them to hold dinner for me. I don't want them holding dinner for me. I don't want them to have to stall dinner for me. I dont want them to have to wait to have dinner for me. I don't want them waiting for me to have dinner.

And that's just one of many.

Loved it... Kate... so enjoyed her getting stomped on. Thank you for sharing your words. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas 2017. Thank you meg

This is a wonderful story...thank you for the journey

Someone needs to smack some common sense into Edward. He's become a misogynistic jerk. I know Kate did some damage, but he can't treat others terribly because of it.

Loved it!

Such a sweet story! Thank you

this is getting reaaaaaally boring really quickly...all its about now is the fucking pregnancy and jesus...NO ONE CARES ENOUGH to read chapter after chapter of this crap

it feels like this chapter was written by a child.
Like they would have seen the fucking DA for a simple assault case...yaaa right.
Like bella is already having "cravings" that send her man out at fucking midnight...shes a month along...get fucking real. And shes already needing her feet rubbed? sounds like bella is gonna be "one of those" pregnant woman. you know the ones...the ones that play that shit up the entire pregnancy, the ones that have "all" the symptoms. and who the fuck wants someone to HOLD THIER HAIR WHILE THIER PUKING? IF IM PUKING STAY THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME...IM BUSY

to be honest I don't really care for all the kate bashing. Sounds like she was with a man that wanted kids and she didn't so she did what she had to do to keep him. Yes of course its wrong to abort without telling/talking about it and then lying about it is just fucked. Also I don't get why she didn't just use her pills quietly, ya know? you don't use abortion as a form of birth control!
though all that's wrong I feel like Edward would have forced her to HAVE a baby if she was pregnant ya know...and that's kinda wrong too since she didn't want kids.
but he acts like he never loved kate...he must of felt something since he asked her to move in with him...marry him...start trying to have babies...he wanted that woman to be the mother of his children...and now all he does is talk shit about her.

also I feel like its WAAAAAAY to early to have bella pregnant...just like it was WAAAYYY to early for the I love yous