Reviews for Guardian and Assassin
shadowbeast84 chapter 2 . 9/13/2018
fuck you why stop?
annieherondalelightwood chapter 2 . 4/4/2017
No offense meant, because I know this is your first story, but it's not that good. Some questions I have that could easily have been answered throughout the text: Why did Annabeth betray Percy? It comes kind of out of nowhere and I don't understand. Why does Poseidon prefer Maos over Percy? Explain. Why do some of the Athena kids not like Maos? Explain please. Also, I'm with Surveyor of Cheese. They left a very long review about grammar and rules of speech. I agree with all of it. What happened to Grover? Big question there. Also, Percy is very impulsive. If he saw Annabeth kiss someone else, he wouldn't "leave silently". He would jump out and confront the two.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2017
that's it?
Percabet4ever chapter 2 . 12/10/2015
Poor percy? Where will he go?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
PLZ UPdate U FRICKING PERSON
pjofan chapter 2 . 2/27/2015
please continue...
kurumakit chapter 2 . 1/16/2015
Come on update soon
Percy696 chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
Really nigga?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
there is only one kampe
mm minimums chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
God story
Mythogirly chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
write more
GoodKnight Studios chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Please update
Theolympiangames chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
Hi I really like this story and I was hoping yiu did not abandon it.
Ella chapter 2 . 4/8/2013
Can u make annabeth dump him harshly? Pleaaaaaaaaase. Make her know Percy heard. She fall in luv wid Percy and forgets that stupid idiotic jerk of a brother.
ZDragonswrath chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
please update i will keep this story saved for two months but if no update i wont save anymore
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