Reviews for Guardian and Assassin |
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shadowbeast84 chapter 2 . 9/13/2018 fuck you why stop? |
annieherondalelightwood chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 No offense meant, because I know this is your first story, but it's not that good. Some questions I have that could easily have been answered throughout the text: Why did Annabeth betray Percy? It comes kind of out of nowhere and I don't understand. Why does Poseidon prefer Maos over Percy? Explain. Why do some of the Athena kids not like Maos? Explain please. Also, I'm with Surveyor of Cheese. They left a very long review about grammar and rules of speech. I agree with all of it. What happened to Grover? Big question there. Also, Percy is very impulsive. If he saw Annabeth kiss someone else, he wouldn't "leave silently". He would jump out and confront the two. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2017 that's it? |
Percabet4ever chapter 2 . 12/10/2015 Poor percy? Where will he go? |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2015 PLZ UPdate U FRICKING PERSON |
pjofan chapter 2 . 2/27/2015 please continue... |
kurumakit chapter 2 . 1/16/2015 Come on update soon |
Percy696 chapter 2 . 12/7/2014 Really nigga? |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 there is only one kampe |
mm minimums chapter 2 . 9/18/2014 God story |
Mythogirly chapter 2 . 6/10/2014 write more |
GoodKnight Studios chapter 2 . 4/17/2014 Please update |
Theolympiangames chapter 2 . 3/23/2014 Hi I really like this story and I was hoping yiu did not abandon it. |
Ella chapter 2 . 4/8/2013 Can u make annabeth dump him harshly? Pleaaaaaaaaase. Make her know Percy heard. She fall in luv wid Percy and forgets that stupid idiotic jerk of a brother. |
ZDragonswrath chapter 2 . 2/20/2013 please update i will keep this story saved for two months but if no update i wont save anymore |