A dream explains a lot. Nice twist ending. Good story.

Setting aside the fact that this is fantasy fiction (Mpreg) a house mortgage,full-time sitter ,utilities, and medical bills would not add up to $100,000/month.

DAMN been sucked into this story all day!

SEQUEL, NEED MORE, hell of a writer :) :)

Wow. I really didn't see that coming! Great story. A sequel would be even better. I hope you consider it. Loved the story!

Woah! I was not expecting that. All a dream?! That was awesome! Nothing better than a story that is suspenseful and dramatic all the way until the end. I thought I would end up with a tear when this came to an end but had a pleasant smile instead. Great job!

WOW what a twist never seen that one coming. Great job!

o: omg plot twist! wow, that was an amazing story. you're an amazing writer, definitely my favorite. this also has to be one of my favorite stories; next to Forever Mine :P thank you for this amazing story, thank you very much. the ending was really shocking, but I liked it :) hope you keep writing for a really long time, you have real talent. 3

Wha-
I simultaneously love and hate stories like this with mind-fucks for endings. I love them because it's so unexpected and it literally leaves me so confused and in awe that it turned out like it did. Why do I hate them? Because none of it - Brielle, Randy, Jay ... - none of it happened. How the hell does Bray know any of this? What is real and what isn't? Is Wade really a douche, same with Chris? What happens now?
Loved this story. I just need to know why and what happens! How? My brain is literally like ? right now

THAT. WAS. AMAZING! (STANDS UP AND CHEERS!)

The ending was just incredible! as was the entire story!

Yes, it is a happy ending, or is it? Was it a dream or premonition?

Thank for the amazing ride this story was, and thank you for finishing it!

I will hope for more of this some day... because I would really like to know the answers!

Wow, that was a mindfuck if there ever was one. I'm not sure if I like this ending or not. Aside from that, good job, but don't be surprised if you get other readers throwing slings and arrows at you.

Chris Jericho impersonating a pharmacist that resulted in the aid of a little girl's death. So didn't see that coming. Can't wait to read more.

Well plot just took a wild twist can't to see where you go with it!

Jay and Brie were so cute together. I am glad he has come with a way to keep her safe, and that was smart to let her think of the code word.

Poor Bray... what a sad story... What does Chris have to do with it! He was a pharmacist? WOW what a way to drop a bomb of mystery! LOVED that.

Adam was so sweet with his boy... LOVE the name...I had to laugh at what Adam said about "what a mouthful" ... it was cute.

Just another wonderful chapter... still hoping things work out for Randy and Adam... and that Jay and Brie are safe! Wondering too if Bray is just a passing character or... ?

Update soon please!

YAY! Randy is awake! Yes this was a important chapter can't wait to read the ending. Maybe alittle sad it is ending.

So much love. I'm interested in knowing baby boy Copeland's name. I'm sure you'll reveal that later. Good chapter, though! :).