With just happend? Omg, in loving thissssss

An author who has to retard his characters to have the plot advance has very poor writing skills. If that’s your only card to play, you really should not be a writer. You are sad and pathetic and I shall be passing over anything else of yours in the future.

It's almost pathetic how helpless he is sometimes despite being a wizard. Almost makes me want to drop this fanfic.

Its better you place the translation beside the original in the story..
Its a bit useles for me to read it in note.. Especially a long translation

Heere's a little bit of irony for you - I just started reading the Trudi Canavan books again. I've started with Age of the Five this time.

But high five for a fellow fan!

I enjoyed this story very much up until the last two chapters, it would be nice to see an update.

Ch5 and seriously fuck off with your plot twists, why have her kidnapped? Why make harry retarded enough not yo check for cameras, to drink, and most of all use magic before checking if its safe? Stop hypong mc to nerf his iq by a 100 in a chapter just for a plot twist

Should probably add the russian translation in the actual chapter and not in the notes...

It was a great story.
Wish you had continued.

Very good start enjoying it

Love this history, can you please continue?
Where can I find more storys like this one?

Fucking bullshit. Complete fucking bullshit. Mr white? Hope he got raped by a gang with aids.

I utterly love it! I really hope you get into the mood to write some more after 5 years.

Update...before it gets ugly...
...impressive and wow...

Dude... this is an excellent story you’ve got yourself. It’s such a shame that it hasn’t been updated in years. People are going to start reposting and adding onto this story without your consent soon. It’s probably already been done. Anyway, I’m still holding out a little hope that you’re going to come back one day. I sincerely hope you do because this story has the so much untapped potential.