OMG! This was wonderful! It warms my heart!

Awwwwwwww...

I looked and looked, and never did I find a reasonable (that is, non crack) story with Sakura's ison/i being pink-haired. Theirs a couple of pink-haired idaughters/i, but not sons. I finally searched specifically for that, and came across your fic. Me like, thanks so much.

Adorable story. thanks!

Aww they're so adorable! Fantastic read!

I've read this years ago and I'm thankful that I stumbled upon it again after all these years. Brings back so many memories (since I rarely read now as an adult with many responsibilities, I was only a kid back then lol) I (still) love it!

Their children are so adorable! More pls :3

After reading your author's note, I just have to say, you did amazing with these two boys. OC's are my least favorite thing in fanfiction. I hate them. I hate them very much. But it honestly didn't even occur to me until I read your AN that the two were OC's. I was all "Oh... yea, that's right. They're not really their children." So, just... you did great at that. I think it was mostly just because there was none of the usual defying the laws of the real fucking world in their creation. And by that I mean... well, like you mentioned, the pink highlight in a child's hair. I nearly failed my high school bio class, and even I know that that's not how traits work. And they also had an interesting combination of personality traits from their parents, while also still being their own person. So often it's like, they have one trait from Sakura and one trait from Itachi. and that's it. Which is just stupid, because again, that's not how it works.
But you kept it very realistic and cute and I liked it :p
Honestly, throughout the whole story, the only thing I would criticize are the baby facts. Like, in my experience, 7 months is actually pretty late to start crawling. And at 100 days, that baby would hardly be able to hold his head up, let alone take steps (even with guidance). But... well I'm just hyper aware of those things right now from just having gone through them. And they're so insignificant to the actual story that it probably wasn't even worth it to bring it up... oh well. Ignore me.
I feel like I sound rude for criticizing that. Don't be offended, I'm quite certain that despite my google-fact checking, I get so many things wrong. Probably mostly Japanese culture. To mention that though, I should say, you're really good at it. I mean, I think... like I said, I suck at it. So I could be completely wrong in thinking you're good at it.
Now I'm rambling.
Sorry.
This was a good story. very cute. I love everything about it. adorable!
Good job yay!

I see what you did there to he purple dinosaur. Poor Barney, always shunned by everyone and is considered by teens and above to be gay (which is so totally true)

Absolutely beautiful story, Sgt. Pierrot!
Definitely being added to my list of favorites.

I really loved the sincerity of your story. The characters are rooted and down to earth. The boys were just so adorable and the love between Itachi and Sakura felt truly genuine. Again, I really loved it and I wanted to just let you know :)

So cute!

i'm sorry to say this but your story didn't make any sense to me

i didnt understant your story it didnt made any sense

I cannot stop laughing! Love it :D awe, Takehiko will marry Sakura one day (": LOLOL, oh you little momma's boy! And yes, your note is being read. Keep up the great work! (: