The song lyrics fit in well with the story.

beautifully lyrical. :)

Aww. That was just a lovely little piece. Well written and it was nice to see another side to McGonagall. Great work!

This was so sad when I found this out on Pottermore. Poor Professor McGonagall, having to change her mind on marrying him because she didn't want them to turn out like her parents. And then she finds out that he's married to another girl now.:( Well, this was amazing, I loved it.:)