Hi,
That was just interesting! I liked how you zipped through in very obvious thoughts and it all kept to a certain theme that definitely goes with Mystique, following whatever it is she does at the moment. The ending with Ororo was very strong too and I loved how you kept the inner thoughts and not speaking up the same too. Thanks!
Paige

One word: beautiful
Greetings from Germany

Wow, this was short , yet so emotionally packed

Loved the story. I like your take on what happened to Mystique afterwards.