That was a great story! Great job!

Good fun. ..and a truly 'brilliant' plot on Junior's part, I knew he had it in 'em. x{D
I really enjoyed how it seemed like it was heading toward Bonnie/Kim, but then there was that awkward conversation that sent it into implied Kigo, excellente.

-May Dread watch over you-

First; Jaime Summers... very funny. I like finding a little morsel like that at the end of a story.

This is the second piece of your's that I've read and I found it well constructed and entertaining. Like the first story, it had little in the way of character development or conflict but still kept my attention throughout. In many ways, I think the stories behind the story are intriguing and I'd really like to know the back stories of the main protagonists here.

Heh, this is so rich. Great story.

Keep the good writing.

Jaime Summers... heh... Bionic Woman's reference.

Keep the good writing.

Wait...you're ending it just like that? That was abrupt. I was kind of hopnig for more...I don't know, Kim and Bonnie adventure.

Overall, I liked the story and the premise, though I feel the mystery ended far too soon. Granted you don't expect complexity where Junior is concerned but I was expecting "the real bad guy" to walk out of the shadows at any moment, using Junior as a cover. It was a good fic. I'm glad I read it.

Darev

Damn, Brick. Seven years in school and the guy never learned to write? What's our system coming to?

I'm anxious to learn the reason behind his wanting Bonnie "scared." Let's face it, the guy's a moron. If he thinks burning down a building and hurting a dancer isn't cause for incarceration then he's a bigger idiot than I gave him credit for.

So both Kim and Bonnnie are...you know? I don't have a problem with it, it's just surprising they would both be on that team.

Darev

It's nice to see the girls bonding, even if it means discussing past failures in love and war. It's good to know that Ron finally stepped out of Kim's shadow. And Wade's been hitting the weights. Good for him.

The plot thickens, as the saying goes. Now we get to run down the list of suspects. But who would want Bonnie out of the way so much they'd risk killing her, and the people around her. That car could have hurt a lot of bystanders.

Finally, a good Bonnie story. I'm glad I stuck around for this one and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Darev

I just stumbled on this story and am glad I did. I haven't seen a lot of Bonnie fics of late. Usually she's just in the background, meant to serve as the annoying antagonist. It's nice to see her in a supporting role instead.

Darev

Good chapter.
I liked your fic. You would have was able to write a relation between the three girl : Kim, bonnie and Shego as in the fic : In The Middle.
I look forward to read your next fic.

so is there going to be a cross over with bionic woman in the future? good fic. i liked it.

Cool ending to a nice story,

What lack of communication can do to some people. At least things turned out relatively well for everyone, but this story still seems wide open.

I wonder if there will be a sequel in stall.

I guess we can only wait.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,
reader101w

Awesome! Not to tell my age but I find the Ms Summers reference to be quite the interesting finish. Poor, poor Bonnie... will she partner or will she not know? And Shego's contribution of things had me in stitches. I give you kudos. Of all the stories I have read by you, I have not found many misspelling, grammar issues or general hard to read passages. This story is not an exception. Thank you.

Great stuff!

Jaime Summers the world's first truly cybernetically-enhanced human? Who would have thought? She almost sounds like the Bionic Woman. I hope Bon-Bon knows what she's in for.

Good work. I loved the Shego cameo.