Unexpected. Poor John is in for a shock

I am dying, puppy the cat.

Great first chapter

I really enjoyed reading this and I loved Jack's teacher!

Just one thing. In the first chapter that baby's eyes are a "deep dark brown." Now, they are a light blue...

I really don't want this story to end in two chapters... i want it to go on for lots more... :(

"Sherlock's got a pig in a jar. I saw it. A baby pig. I named him Wiggle."
That's my new favorite line of anything in this story so far. Wiggle! HA!

Oh god that was the most precious chapter ever in lifes. yes, lifes.

awww! Very sweet.

Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it! Would love to read a continuing story!

"If you find yourself needing to fake your own death again anytime soon Sherlock, don't hesitate to contact me. I'm quite capable of making people disappear." Love it!

That was one long reading I had to do, the 21 chapters all at once! XD
Since there was so much to comment and I don't want to make you say "dull" and skip the review, I will just make a little list (without colours or colaboration, sorry...):
1- I have to admit I didn't like the idea at first, because I just can't see Irene and Moriarty having an affair. I liked the kid, and I think it was a clever way to get him into the universe, but I can't see it happening... Sorry!
2- I love your Sherlock. He is cold and oblivious enough, without coming out as cruel. Very IC.
3- The best about this fanfic, in my view, is how you carry the John-Sherlock relationship slowly into a couple without sex. And how Sherlock slowly walks towards phisical romantic contact. I agree that he would refuse to have sex for a long time, and even to kissing. He is not completely comfortable with touching.
4- Jack is so cute! Sometimes he seems a little weird for his age (writing kids is always so difficult...), but since he is who he is, it works perfetly.
5- I couldn't stop laughing at the thought of Anthea with all those Ikea projects. Poor thing... I'd like to see a little Mycroft-Anthea happening. A little more...

I loved the fanfic O Thank you for sharing!

Aww, this is a really good idea :)

Lovely chapter.

So, so, so, so, so absolutely, stunningly brilliant. My pathetic, tired review (after machine-gunning all 21 chapters at 2am) cannot express how much I truly loved this fic and everyone in it. Your John and Sherlock are amazing, Mycroft is darling, and Jack is so devastatingly charming that I want to just pick him up and squeeze him every time that I read his name. Sometimes he would say or do something and I would find myself giggling uncontrollably at how absolutely perfect he was.

This whole story was a welcome relief from the crap-tastic short stories that I've been editing for the past few days, so all I can really say is, "Thank you so much!" I can also say, with total conviction, that this is one of the best fanfics I've read in a very long time and I am eagerly awaiting anything more with this particular universe! Cheers!

-Lina