Reviews for Demonic Naruto |
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ShiniKami999 chapter 6 . 10/29/2017 i shall adopt |
Soul-Even chapter 4 . 7/1/2016 ..."(!)" |
rhizz17 chapter 6 . 3/7/2016 update please |
Giulia chapter 5 . 7/15/2014 PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! continues the story, this fanfiction is too good to be interrupted or abandoned well! At least you propose adoption! I am Italian and I'm not inscribed on this site, but if you were (and if I knew how to write in English without the fear of making grammatical errors monstrous), and if I knew how gets, I would adopt the story myself (sorry if there are errors but to write this I'm using google translator). However, I wanted to tell you that your story is beautiful and I wanted to let you know that if I run out of inspiration to keep me and other readers will be more than happy to help you by giving you our ideas. (if you want contact me this is my e-mail: ) |
Layla Riddle chapter 5 . 2/10/2014 Please update! I like this! |
Dracoessa chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 Konoha, your sssooooo boned. |
Demoninside2 chapter 5 . 6/9/2013 update please |
GeneralLazyBoy chapter 5 . 11/2/2012 Great Story. Please keep updating |
gabyxx21 chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 I loved looking forward to the next chapter |
Darkryus chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 lol nice story so far update soon |
Ashar chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 I'm sorry to say your fanfic wasn't all that great before (too fast paced, a little too full of stereotypes and an WAY too OC Naruto), but at least it was readable. Now this idea of you to have him creating himself split personality just messed up everything and spoiled what good was there. Was I in your shoes I'd rethink this last step at the very least. |