Just as an aside...'hajimemashite' is used only when greeting someone for the first time...after that it's usually ohayo gozaimasu (good morning), konnichiwa (the typical 'hello' or good day), konbanwa (good evening), or hisashiburi desu (kind of like saying 'it's been a while'). :}

Any chance of a sequel? Even just one-shots of AU scenes during the series(s)?

Definitely enjoyable.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing :)

LOVE IT! THANKS FOR SHARING!:)

I loved your story. I wish there was more of it. Do you ever plan to write more Torchwood. I see you are mainly writing for Hawaii Five O now. Just so you know, I would be greatly interested in reading more especially if you planned on changing the events of COE. Thanks for sharing your story.

As long as Gwen and Jack don't start flirting and making googley eyes at each other, I will be ok with
Gwen. I liked some aspects of her on the show but mostly I thought she was a selfish b that thought to highly of herself.

Poor Ianto is feeling the strain of life at Torchwood 3. I wish he had mentioned his worries about Suzie to Jack.

Loved the smexiness at the end and I wish you could do more too.

Loved all the extra info on ianto and love caretaker Jack.

I can't help but feel that Suzie is just as uncomfortable with Ianto as he is with her. I think she did something that caused the power outage that let the weevil out. She was hoping that would be the end of Ianto but there was more to him than she realized. I am really not liking Suzie.

Ianto is so perceptive, glad that Jack thought about what he said enough to talk with Suzie. I am wondering if your story will have the same outcome as the series. You have changed some things already.

"This is not a mess. This is bigger than a mess," hissed Ianto as slowly began making his way through. Careful not to hit anything or knock anything over. "This is a catastrophic monstrosity, wrapped in a earth shattering disaster, and covered in tiny drops of hell." That line made me laugh out loud. I just love Ianto.

I loved the introduction to the team. Ianto's sarcastic wit and Owen's quick turn around after tasting his coffee had my laughing. Really enjoying your story so far.

I loved that it was Jack pursuing Ianto instead.