Writing something from Mary and Paula's POVs must've been the hardest challenge ever but you unbelievably nailed it. The actions and reactions were awesome and everything else about this story was outstanding. The backstory we got was perfect and I really just hope your writing lasts forever, you've got a talent.
Amazing job! :)

awwww I really love this story it's really amazing :3

this is really nice seeing the two perspectives, i preferred marys though

I wish all moms where as good as Artemis's and Wally's. *sigh*

Oh gosh. Oh gosh gosh gosh, Dicey, I loved this. I loved how thoughtful at was, how in-depth it was. I loved how it peered into the very heart of two characters that are almost never pictured in the show, and by doing such peered into the hearts of Wally and Artemis. This was so special and it shows just how clearly you understand Spitfire. You just GET them. Agh, I love this. SO much. Wonderful writing.

I love this story!

Awesome fic! But was it me or was Wally's dad's name changed for Rudy to Randy several times? haha
Great job though! :)

Why must you ruin my feels?

It's all happy and perfect and I just want to cry. So. Many. Feels.

This was an excellent story. I loved the point of views of both mothers. You did a great job with this.

Oh wow, this is awesome! I love how it describes it from the Mothers' points of view, but you still get a picture of Wally and Artemis, and you just see how they fit together.

One thing, though, is you used Rudy and Randy throughout the fic as Wally's dad's name. :)

But, yeah, I really love this! And I love how it's not completely identical for each mom. Like, for Artemis, the training exercise is the one with the parents and children separating, and for Wally it's the one where Artemis "dies" instead of it being the same, you know? I liked that!

Cute cute cute cute cute

Omg that was the most fantabulous story I've ever read, you should do more

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This is so adorable, I can't even put into words how much I love this. There just aren't enough fanfics that include the Team's mothers. Great job!

I adore this, it is just so well written. It was inspiring to read from the eyes of Artemis and Wally's mothers and how they view their children and the lifes they lead. A great piece of work.