Aw she get him whipped into shape in no time. Great story!

Oh ho. I hope he wins haha. Great chapter!

Cute story

Nice story! Just one thing though...you could have brought a little more emotion to the kiss...

I really loved it! Specially because I love to run too! :)

Why do you make lily sound like a stuckup bitch? And we don't need all the details about running. No one cares.

N'aww! So cute :)

BLAH I can't believe I didn't notice that you updated this. Like last night was my first time on FF in FOREVER so I pretty much just saw this now. This is so gloriously sweet. I love how Lily won the bet instead of James, therefore successfully dodging a cliche. I like how she's still very headstrong and independent while not being all goody-two-shoes, and having a very powerful personality. Fantastic3

very cute. i loved lily's determination and the ending was very cute:)

At first, I wasn't gonna write a review - but then, I saw that you said it'd mean the world to you, so you should be glad I have a heart. Anyway, this is really good - and it's so cute! I love how, instead of studying, she goes running, instead. She's really passionate about it, and as she was running, I found myself urging her on, willing her to beat him, to crush him. I'm a feminist like that.

But this was a brilliant story. You shouldn't continue it, or anything, otherwise that would ruin it.

:3 I still love how orginal this tale is. :) I'm glad you made Lily win, but I liked the scene where he pulled her in thr lake. I do believe though, that their first kiss happened far too early in the story.

This was really sweet. I like the idea of lily as a runner. Your writing was fantastic. Solid fic.

really good.

This is adorable. 3

That was great. Really cute and sweet.