I thought that was really cute! You captured the characters nicely and made it funny and sweet. Awesome job

I thought this was a cute short story. something similar to what you would see a continuation of the manga.

AWWE 3 to fuckin kyoot!

aww! i loved it so cute! they were all in character so great job! )

My gosh I luved it! I'm really bad at writing reviews but I had 2 say that was awesome. Totally amazayn!(:

r u a dummy or wat? write more! it was great!

I have no idea how this doesn't have any reviews. This was perfect. And I'm not kidding. You kept Kyo and Tohru in perfect character, didn't make it too sappy or cheesy, or had bad grammar. It was so well written. I loved the ending. I could definitely see this happening in "Fruits Basket".
This was great and I hope you write more. Great job! :)