Amazing plot.
Only thing wrong is that Jenny wasnt portrayed as the girl she was in the show. Other than that it WAS amazinguyen

Ok. So in the show Jenny wasnt that bad. In this story she is an absolute idiot sometimes. Then again she has Dan for an uncle. What can u expect?
I like the story though. Cant wait to find out what happen nest!

Why do people hate Jenny? I LOVE her! She was always great. Besides, she isnt insane like her uncle.
But Im glad jennys back. I just hope get stays a one of the good guys!

I just love your work so much and I also write both my own work and fan fiction and I really would love to do a work with you

I think the ideas are good, but the story just doesn't come off as being in the least bit realistic. Also, if Chris was legally dead, Leo (even with Wyatt's help) would not have been able to heal him. Whitelighters can't heal the dead.

Oh, and the story takes place in San Francisco, but you used a lot of British slang... It would have been better without it.

Great Story. I Dislike The Girl And Greg. So Annoying Hateful Idiots

I'm sorry but I didn't like this story. For one thing Jenny is completely OOC here. Granted we didn't get to see enough of her in the show to know everything about her but from what was shown she was a nice, sweet, if not typical teenage girl. However she wasn't stupid, she wasn't some self entitled man hogger, and the sisters all liked her very much for the short time that they knew her. This fiction goes into character bashing territory which I do not approve of. Nothing about Jenny's character in canon has anything of the makings of a psycho or dangerous stalker so having her here for literally no reason like this and portrayed like this isn't right.

Omg. Love this and past mistakes I love charmed especially season 6 cause of chris and I love how you have given us family moments and mainly chris and leo moments. Love it! Would love if you made another charmed one cause you are really good and I would totally read them :)

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GRRR I HATE BOTH GREG AND JENN NOW

Bleh I felt myself about to puke when Jenny was A) Flirting with Chris and B) THINKING and FANTASIZING about him. JEEZ.

Great story! Too bad that it's alreay finished! Just like Past Mistakes I loved reading it. A haunted Dan is great, and I'm glad that Gregg en Jenny our out of their lives too.

I like it and I like the part when Jenny gets whats coming to her. I never like her to begin with but then she tried to get Chris that is when I totally hated her and wanted her gone for good.

(grins) one of the most enjoyable read in this fandom. Well prosed too. And if there were any mistakes, I was to entrenched in the story to notice them...or maybe I turned a blind eye to them. (chuckles) Either way, the plot distracted me from any.

(snaps fingers in frustration) Damn...Piper, or anyone really, should have done a bit more damage...but I suppose I could content myself with the thought that the dead would be haunting the crazies for the rest of their pathetic lives.

Hnnn, my alarm bells were already going overload when Chris woke up to her staring at him. I mean, c'mon. The whole lost thing only go so far. If she was lost to begin with, it didn't account for the fact that she was already in the room, staring over him. (throws hand up in exasperation) Normal people would stop at the door and continue on to find the restroom. Not enter said wrong room. (glares at the three women) Obtuse didn't even erin to justify them for their actions.

My rantings aside (waves hand dismissively), I thoroughly like reading the story. Though I would be happier if you throw the three psychos to eternal hell. (grins) My thanks for a lovely time spent.

Oh, you poor dear. Here. (gives you an electronic pain-relievers)

I have a question. I take it from a line in this story that you do not believe in God?