I truly hope you get the report of my characters & add them to your upcoming stories.

This is interesting.

I was wondering if you could put Noah Raymond Thompson my male panda bear/werewolf hybrid character, Spencer Daniel Ricardo my male gorilla character & Marcus Leon Metzner my male lion character into your next series of stories p!ease? I also would love to see them get wrapped up in pizza dough as well as Wolf O'Donnell as well. Just a head's up about all 3 of my male characters that I had mentioned are all mega gross, smelly, & disgusting. They are also gay & totally loves butt farting on other characters faces. They hate violence, drugs, smoke alarms, & cake. They can be either hero or villain doesn't matter to me as long as they stay can make my characters whatever height you want but they are all mega heavyweights in muscles but not fat. Please make sure that you remember that Spencer Daniel Ricardo is rainbow colored. The other 2 I will let you decide all the details but pretty sure you don't forget their piercings & tattoos.

Its been seven years ever since the promise of a sequel... I just read the whole thing starting yesterday... I shall search until I've found the lovely continuation.

falco doesn't have fists he's a fucking bird

Damalgo hates violence, yet he brandishes his mace and says "I like the way you think".

This seems to be a contradiction. Good chapter, otherwise.

5 Years ago, I stumbled upon this story, and I wound up reading through most, if not all, of the stuff you've written about StarFox. When I found this stuff in the 8th grade, it rocked my world.

5 Years later, I'm revisiting these stories. Pretty good so far, although I must note that space is many, many orders of magnitude bigger than portrayed here. If a ship was 10 kilometers East of Katina and 20 kilometers west of Aquas, it would be in both planet's atmospheres, and the planets themselves would've torn each other apart, tidal forces and all.

Then again, the canon doesn't leave much room for realistic portrayals of space, so whatever. The writing itself is pretty good thus far, and the chapter names are very inventive.

I like the part where Krystal mentioned that Marcus was her father's name.

They should make a movie about Star Fox

Sweet Krazoa, this story is awesome. Question: isn't Marcus supposed to be just as psionically gifted as his mother? The cerinian phenotype is incredibly strong, if Marcus' pigmental dominance is any indication. Second, Fox heard Krystal's telepathic distress call when he was in Moon Mountain Pass, and that was BEFORE he became her mate, indicating that she was capable of emitting a wide-spectrum psionic SOS in spite of being well under her maximum telepathic capacity. I'm sorry if I'm coming off sounding like a total sphincter, it's not intentional. I personally believe that these are valid questions. Minor punctuation and spelling errors notwithstanding, this is incredibly - I repeat - INCREDIBLY impressive writing, taking into account that it was written by a fifth-grader. Your creativity and delivery are in league with mine, and I happen to be a clever, witty fifteen year-old with a fine mind for literature and music, courtesy of mama. Archer Avalon, coming soon to . In case anybody missed my point before, THIS STORY IS AWESOME! Five stars! Archer out.

Oh, and a few more VA suggestions:

F-Zero Announcer: Xander Mobus
Peter: John Patrick Lowrie

This is just like that fight in Cyberlife headquarters on Detroit: become human Connor vs Connor fight in the video game

Fox: Jim Walker
Falco: Matt Mercer
Slippy: Scott Burns
Krystal: Hellena Taylor
Peppy: John Demita
Kursed: Cindy Robinson
Marcus: Joe Zieja
Chase: Mike McAuliffe
Anna: Eden Riegel
Coyote: E.G. Daily
Wolf: Peter Bramhill
Panther: Dave Fennoy
Damalgo: Rufus Jones
Andross: Jamieson Price

Gee, what should I say? What CAN I say? This is a very well-written fic from start to finish, warrents a read from ANY Star Fox fan!

Hi, ZombieAxeHero! Love the story, everything in it. You, sir, have talent. Hope you're doing well!

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