I am in love with this. Haha... in the last chapter with the wedding tidbit. That was amazing. I really want to see what you'll do next. I can't wait for the other origin stories too, if you'll do them.

this is really good i don't usually like slash but i really like this can't wait for more chapters

ok that was the cutest thing EVER! X3

Hey. Sorry about the delay. Love the story so far. Carmen is a great character. A perfect mix of Steve and Tony. I loved the chapter three with her strength as a four year old. I want to cuddle her so much! I'm glad you put this up too. I'm in the need of something excellent to follow. Can't wait for your dark and scary next chapter. :D

Mistali