Loved it good job yo.

I liked this story. Fugaku was an typical a $$. But that's to be expected. I'm very sorry for Sakura. Normally, I can't stand her. But here, she really was a good person. So I'm sorry that she's alone. Still, I'm glad that Sasuke finally said to hell with reputation. And went with Naruto. All in all this was good. Gotta watch the mistakes though. And I'm not talking about grammar. But the broken lines here and there. These things caused some confusion as to what was meant. Still, on the up side. The story was interesting. It was humorous. And there was definite chemistry between Naruto and Sasuke. Their dialog was flawless. And they were both well in character. Nice job!

Very sweet story

omg, this was the saddest but cutest story i've read in a while :')

perfect , just perfect

I don't understand why she is making this so difficult. Being married to money. I'm sure if she wants love she can get a lover. I'm really really sure Sasuke won't mind. This marriage was a legal agreement not made for love..

He could go work for his brother and if he wants he could "hire" Naruto as a "bodyguard" and still get something like a marriage to some woman that doesn't even like him. Problem solved.

If Sasuke touched himself it would have counted as a three way.

Very cute, nice a fluffy 3
Though I have to say that the story did move really quickly. Like, not even anything to do with the time laps, just before then, while they were talking through the walls, it was moving really fast. I would have loved to hear more of a back story for both Sasuke and Naruto, and it would have made your story longer too, which is always nice :)
Also, I noticed a LOT of spelling and grammar errors throughout, and that makes the reader sort of lose interest in the story, because they are focusing on the errors, not the story.
But I loved the plot, It was very nice and heart-warming.
Very Kawaii
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This was sweet and sad. It was bittersweet..

Such an amazing story, I loved it! :)

Wth?
Your story was going gret and then you just like totally f*cked it up. Sasuke just goes home like he hadn't prebiously been against it. He doesn't even tell naruto himself? Then naruto just agrees with itachi's bullshit like nothing. Then you have Sasuke marry Sakura!? Your story went from good to stupid in like two seconds. Plus your making it out that itachi wants to do good by his brother and make him happy but he's actually doing the complete oposite. I can't even bring myself to keep reading.

Falling in love through the walls is one of the most romantic ideas I've ever read. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

I liked it. It was soft and sweet without being annoying.

Am I the only one that cares about Sakura? Her dad died and her husband left her...