This is pretty good. Do some editing, though, for spelling and such. Some letters were missing in some words exetra, exetra. Still, lovely job.

One note is Flynn seems a bit...out of character.

Great story! Everything's told neatly and concisely, detailing the movie to the T. And I loved hearing it from Eugene's perspective. Really good job!

This was really cute lol I read it all in one sitting it was too good to not finish (:

Awwwwuuhh!

Lol way to go Eugene for keeping it 'classy' at the end -.- I wouldn't have minded a little more detail :\ being the nosey person I am :3

This is really cute! I like how you're putting everything in his POV.

Great story! Will you continue? :)

The last two paragraphs of this chapter are just superb! Him admitting his feelings for her and being terrified about it... His desire to hold her and kiss her and his non-desire to steal again or to have his own island and being alone... Simply bee-you-tea-full...

I think the best parts of the whole story are the ones where you portray his feelings and thoughts and confessions rather than those which just describe the facts as they happened cause we all know them... We saw the movie!

Great job so far!
Getting better chap after chap...

LOl really funy...poor tree !

Please, please, please write more! I loove it. Exactly the kind of fanfic I was looking for. Oh, and you could do more too and write what would have happened to them after the movie ended. And the towel scene too, since they cut it after they kissed. Please keep writing. Amazing. I can really imagine him thinking all these things.

hope you upload more this is good