Update!

Nice.

Great story! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

I really like this, and it's a great idea! PLease write more sooN! :)

I hope they, all of them, doesn't get trouble...

Can't wait for more.. :)

I normally don't critique like this, but I found a few typos you might want to fix.

"decreased" deceased
"Stratford" Stanford
"There like unbeatable" They're
"there going to be thinking " they're
"They're find out soon " "They'll"
"lead start" head
"were one step " we're

interesting, more please !

this is really good;D
i love the idea of Penelope being dean and sams cousin!

Thanks for update, more please soon - MORE :-)))! And happy holiday !

plez update

The story is interesting. Unfortunately your last chapter contains a lot of errors: some grammar, some spelling, some math. "The murders had occurred every other twenty years during eighty meaning ten people had been killed four separate times." I don't think that you wanted "other." Also, how do 3 bodies reveal a hexagram. If you are only indicating 3 bodies that would be a triangle, unless you mean that all of the 1st, 5th, and 10th bodies combined from each set of ten, together made a hexagram? Next, if the killings had been going on for 80 years, every twenty years, then the killer is working on his 5th set of victims (year 0, year 20, year 40, year 60, year 80). So if the hexagon was complete from the previous set of victims, what is going on with this set? Unless he'd already killed all 10 from this set, but then we'd be back to you only mentioning 4 sets instead of 5.

Please understand, this is not meant as a flame but a constructive criticism. The story is good but the last chapter is confusing.

OMG, your update is the first CMSPN update from 14.11. - I have withdrawal symptoms :-))) And I love your story, more please soon, PLEASE !

Hm... nice.

very good story continue

You put Priestess instead of Prentiss at the end of the chapter, there's also a missing period at the end of the BAU's introductions.