thats so fucking sad

Did she die

A wonderful letter. She sure has changed. It has some depth in it which toches the heart (at last mine)
Im looking forward for your preque for Inner Demons. I also have read the other story related to it. I loved every single chapter.

Your work is inspiring and it is like watching a movie in my head. Thank you for that.

Dang that was awesome ! I just don't understand what happened between them and who's midnight oh sorry if I'm being to negative but I really did love the story and I hope you keep doing this kind of stuff.

Wow fantastic ending.
I have only one question tho? Does apple bloom when she gets older does she find lezerd?

I just finished reading 'Inner Demons' on FiMFiction, and this is a nice little addition to that. Keep up the great work, hope to see a sequel soon.

P.S.: Will you be posting this on FiMFiction as well?

I found myself reading this aloud in Twilight's voice...

I was thinking, for a part two, maybe Diamond Tiara is the daughter of The Queen of Darkness? Apple bloom and Lezards daughter could run off too fight it, because her mother coddles her too much, but the daughter didn't know what her mother had done in the past. In the end they defeat Diamond Tiara forever.

This was great, i enjoyed seeing more of how the events of Inner Demons affected everyone, especially Twilight and Apple bloom.

I would love to see Celestia's response

I'm glad that everyone got closure. Well everyone except for Lezard. I hope that one day you give him closure with a 10 years later one shot. Well keep doing what your doing.

It's a wonderful read! I loved how it was a last part of the letter.

Kinda left a warm and fuzzy feeling at the end there. I get the feeling visiting Canterlot won't be a problem for Twilight anyway, so it isn't like there is a problem with where she lives. Great oneshot.

The one filly though, Diamond Tiara, is a little standoffish still. I don't know, she has an unusual aura, one that I didn't notice until recently. I think it's because I'm an Alicorn now. What do you think I should do?

Inner Demons Part 2: The Return of Midnight
Or
Inner Demons Part 2: The Daughter of Queen Midnight

I'm sorry, but If you're going to go through all the trouble to address a detail, then it has to have some significance. Who knows? Maybe Midnight had an apprentice or daughter or something before she died. It could even has been a dragon or other species that reincarnated into Tiara. I mean, if anyone would sense it, it would be Queen Midnight reborn in Twilight!