These sad, alternative storyline "Laputa" one-shots are, for some reason, so enjoyable to read. Muska's inner thoughts are interesting, the ending is cryptically emotional, and this story definitely deserves more favs & reviews than it has now

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I love everything about this! You really capture his character perfectly! And, your writing is wonderful!

So...So beautiful that I want to cry ;-; 3

Wow. That's pretty good. I never thought of Muska as her lover I always thought of it as her father or uncle. It is interesting to think of his evil to be out of love instead of powerlust. Keep writing:-)

Aww. That was cute. Sad, but cute. This is one of the messed up pairings that I enjoy. And this made my list of 'fics that I enjoyed reading!

This is absolutely beautiful writing. I particularly love the understatement of your last line. It's a real shame nobody else has reviewed this yet! For concrit, I'm wondering whether the lack of punctuation/capitalisation in the title and summary may be making people think your work has those sort of errors in it, which simply aren't there. Prettying them up might encourage others to give this lovely bit of writing the respect it deserves. Thank you for writing x