Unlikely Alliance has just been finished, you can check it out when you get the time

I am very interested in seeing how this story will unfold. I was wondering, however, if the Shepherds will be paragons, renegades, or a mixture. If you would rather not share that information at this time, I can fully understand that, but I am not a particular fan of the renegade story line - I do not mind a mix of the two, but a purely renegade story would be far from enjoyable for me - and would appreciate being forewarned if that is to be the case.

Thank you for continuing this story where the previous author left off, I am sure you will do a marvelous job.

Unlikely Alliance has been updated, hope you get the chance to read it, this story that you wrote yourself is not bad, keep it going, this is very interesting.

this could get interresting... fast

This story is developing nicely. I look forward to seeing how it develops. The difficulty Jane is having in not acting on what she knows should provide for some interesting plot developments. Hopefully she uses this knowledge to change things up.

Fuck, this is what I've been looking for! PLEASE make more of this, I'm dying to see how this all plays out!

Good job so far. Aside from some minor typos this is coming along really well.

Not bad, not bad at all, I have good news to tell you, Immatureboys has updated his sequel to unlikely encounter, the story has Tekken characters in it. You should read it.

Oh, nice! I wish the chapter were a bit longer, but it's going good so far!

What really bothered me about the chapter was the sudden bold text that told us about Jane Hiller Shepard. It was a bit long too.

I saw some grammar mistakes as well, but they could be easily fixed.

I'm open minded to another FemShep X Garrus and Sheploo X Tali fanfiction. I can't wait to see the rest!

Yuki

In your Author Note at the bottom...what do mean by "Ttran2323 has decided to discontinued her work"...I'm a guy.

Aside from that, I don't see any major problems so far. I liked how you kept it similar to the original but different than mine to truly make it yours. I had completely forgotten about Anderson during the entire thing and I guess I did make the time in which the Reapers destroy the universe very small which hadn't occurred to me when I originally wrote this.

Can't wait to see more of this when you get around to it... *Rolls Eyes* when you have the time...