One of the best H50 fictions I have read.

Wow, this was amazing. I wish somehow this could get to the writer's of this show to review. They could learn a thing or two from you about how to write a story for these characters. Truly amazing. It looks like it's been 5 years or so since you wrote this, but it's new to me. Wish they'd make and episode out of this...loved it!

The muse, the breakfast muse, the saber toothed plot bunny and you make quite the team (with the kind assistance of swifters, of course.) Another good one, Irene Claire.

Some stories I am glad to read in entirety, this is one, especially once Dano is kidnapped...I hated the villains...loved June, will she be Dano's soulmate?

The narrative was great

recommend a copy of a PDR...Physicians Desk Reference for future use for authenticity...CDC has some info as well...

I loved this story t he whole way through. Absolutely loved the lightheartedness done in this chapter after everything. And LOVE Steve and Dannys bickering in this chapter so much!

Wow! Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing!

This is the best fan fiction that I have read till date.. Loved it.. I The author never compromised any of the characters of H50, and that was the beauty. Mcdanno relationship was the best... Really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the story.

Wow! All this b/c of Stan. Poor Danny all he went through. But in the end he came out of it ok.

OMG! Loved this! You are such an amazing writer, I really enjoyed June and you filled my need for Danny whumpege too :)

Loved this story. Went through it in one sitting tonight and it just got better as the chapters went by and you got into the swing of the narrative. Thanks for spending such a long time writing it. I know it was written a few years ago but it is still fresh to me. I appreciate that you didn't do a quick story with an injured Danny one minute and fine the next. Injuries, both physical and emotional, take time to heal and those kinds of journeys are the best to read. Adore the hurt/comfort with Steve worrying over Danny. My favorite kind of fiction. Mahalo and look forward to reading your other stories.

I just came upon this story recently and was not reviewing chapter by chapter, but this was absolutely fantastic! The plot was very exciting, with lots of Danny whump and Steve angst. You are a top-notch fanfiction writer.

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Awesome story, loved the twist and the end. Loved the ohana parts, especially the Steve and Danny moments.

No problem and thank you for fixing it so quickly, it was an awsome chapter and they have all been so far.