It would be really funny If Lady Loki resembled Lily Evans-Potter. ould have loved it if Loki's Magic destroyed Tom Riddles wrath at the same time He Got rid of Quarrel.

Hope to see where you go with this.

i really like Lori/Loki how you write her-him_ he-she is a great mother-father who trys the best in Situation there where and are in to do well and used the Chance to free his children from the abuse and misstreatment...and trys to make a live for her-himself and the kids_ will the other two children come too or stay free outside in the world, atleast they dont Sound as if they where prisoners? but maybe best when ot in hoghwarts... or can you think to Trouble maker bonding with the twin weasley troublemaker, they will turn it all upside down :)

Fawkes and loki... will this be a pairing? ...so is fawkes a shapeshifter too like this special stallion?
i think lokis adopted and Thors real father is a more or less sick selfish guy who does not see things like they are and could be in future...or he woul never have misstreated this Babys and later teen loki did birth or had with somene...he would uerstand that they are his grandchildren... while he was in fear of one possible future Thing...like i always do say.. it is as if you hit and slap or kick a puppy because some stupid oaf did say it could bite one day..

poor children, hope they can loose some of there fears and worries and bad dreams and hurt while together with there Family and People they made friends with interesting choice for houses

but i hope that Harry will be more close with lokis children and some other children from different houses and so mybe even become real friends with draco Theo and blaise when he is not influenced by molly dumbles and such People...or keeped away from other children and Teens by Ron and hermione ... and maybe Ron will become his own Person and not such a jealousy twat...or hermione who try to know it all but does not try to see all colours and sides and the old histry and laws of magic... hope this two can Change..

Luna a second year is great and like a great person
also Cedric makes a good big-brother to the younger but also other children
draco - blaize and Theo...just great friends for the Little snake
severus does not seem to be so mean and full of hate against Harrys father that he puts on the son, but wants to protect and help, from he thoughts atleast , and seems to be a still fair and stearn head of house and hopeful a good teacher

only mc konogal is the same terrible head of gryfindor...and from what i did read there are rooms for teacher with family, when they so wish for...hoghwarts has many unused wings and rooms and living quarters...so dumbles and her are wrong and do not as they sjhould as headmaster and co headmaser of the School...i hope hoghwarts will this time ot accept this behavior for long...

Harry sounds cute and i hope he Comes into Loris-Lokis care soon_
but one Thing im unsure about is... Harry is still a human child...so he will not live so long even as a wizard so it would hurt Loki/ Lori and her children when they grow Close and form a bond... when he will grow old and die some day...for a good this time is nothing much, so...will he be some creature or something?

may i ask, will Harry find a male lover/mate one day when old enough for such thoughts? Fenris or best friends?
even when not, and this Story is without pairing, and all about hoghwarts time, growing up, Family and learning to life free i cant wait to see where this will go and what will happen next_

Very nice.
I will bookmark and look for more hopefully soon.

Omg. Amazing story. Please update soon

Fantastic

It all fits together well

This is going to be a brilliant story. I love the fact that Hogwarts seems enamoured if Loki/Lori and the children...I also have a feeling that the five Aldricksons are going to just love the twins...is Hogwarts and her staf ready for the Trickster God to meet up with Demon Twins heehee.

Huh I did not see Jordan becoming friends with Draco. I figured if all of them it would be Blaise and possibly Theo but with Jordan being so different I figured Draco would be against him...I’m happy I was wrong.

So is it Theo that Jordan notices? Interesting usually Luna is a tiny innocent girl younger and frail until you rile her up but I can see her and Hela getting along. I wonder if Luna knows who Hela is?

Lol Jordan reminds me a bit of Harry looks like a waif that would blow away in a gentle breeze but upset him or hurt someone he cares for and he will become a powerhouse with no comparison. So how long before Draco ticks off Joren lol.

So the hat knows Hela is a Golding but not exactly just who she is. Personally I don’t think Slytherin ir Draco would have survived Hell lol.

Hel will have problems at Hogwarts wearing that mask but I have a feeling that they will only get one chance to mock or hurt her lol. Interesting meeting with Minerva but I can’t wait til Loki/Lori meets Severus lol.

Did Loki notice the hitchhiker on Quirrel?

Thanka for updating. I don't feel that the voice or feel of Loki has changed any. Look forward to more in the future.