it seems like you could make more for this story its really great

Isnt 47C cold

Hey! You are a lemon god! Had me curling me damn toes ya did. :). There were quite a few typos. Want me to clean it up so it'll shine? Pm me :) btw, please continue this. I'm not very fond of Yokozawa and i'm curious how takano's going to deal with him. Hurray for smokin shower smut!

ooooohhh eeeeeemmm ggggeeee! *faints* that was super sexy and SO hot! o LOVE IT! :3 :3

fangirling... nosebleed...fainting... read again- bit of a cycle I find :)

OMG! MORE MORE MORE MORE! PLEASE!

nosebleeeed
kyaaaaaaaaa! 3 3 3
that was awesome and hot!

i love it

I had to keep quiet because my mother was sleeping in the room next to mine, but I nearly squealed out loud! So sweet! I needed a few minutes to calm down... Definitely a favorite! Great Story! Love it 3 !

I Loved It

You're amazing on writing Lemons... That was a great story although I agree with the those two little details... Yuu isn't a editor and definitely Ritsu is not a boy... But other than that a great fanfic... Actually, you should do a second chapter where you can finish what happen with Yokozawa and the dateline... :)

That was GREAT.
You HAVE to write more about these two, please.

The story is nice but here are many flaws:

1. Yuu isn't an editor. He's Chiaki's assistant so he shouldn't be in this story as an editor.
2. Takano's eyes aren't black. They are amber.
3. Ritsu isn't a boy. He's a man as he is 26.

I liked this (: and the lemon was pretty good but; YanasenYuu isn't an editor and would have
nothing to do in that office, he is manga assistant for Yoshino Chiaki (: Onodera isn't a boy; he's 26 '!'! It sounds very wrong (: he's man :b