Thank heavens it wasn't that sicko hojo

This story is so great even if unfinished. you made all of them seem so real. Simply incredible!

more? but it's been 3 years. still have no clue what's going through collin and cho s heads

update this amazing story pls T_T

You really need to update. This story puts me on the edge then any story. This is excellent~

Poor Clou-Er, Colin. Man, that's weird...
Pretty good, I like this.

You really need to continue this. You capture the elegant deadliness of sephiroth well. The transition and merger is well-done.

There is no good reason to accept the detention's exercises beyond sticking to the canon. But oh well.

Huh... well that ended well, I was honestly expecting Harry/Sephiroth to attempt suicide by Friends a la Angeal...

Do me a solid and make another chapter yeah?

As weird as this story is, I'm really starting to enjoy it. Great work so far!

I'll be honest and say that that was easily the BEST chewing out scene against the Ministry I've EVER SEEN! Great job!

i just had shivers... seph, angeal and gen

geez! why would harry continue going to umbridge detention? this fuck up story is no different than the book. still the same old easy to manipulate harry and fool harry.. nothing major changes happen i don't have any reasons to continue reading this anymore if the stories goes what happens in the books..

In canon, Harry was a beaten down wimp, so of course he took all knocks that came his way. Here it just makes no sense. Any sane person would tell Umbridge to just fuck off, it's not like she can justify her illegal idea of detention to anyone else. She wants to keep it hidden and private like all her other dirty laundry and so she can not tell about it to anyone. You've made Sephiroth as submissive as Harry, and that breaks my suspension of disbelief more than anything else in this story so far.