i like this one

love it

This is Brilliant!

I came everywhere

and then I farted

Then I hit those showers!

So cute! It's as if the comic book ending I wanted came true

i loved but it is qreepy when star knoes when someone thinks

:))))))))))) happy feels!

Insanely cute story _ I loved it.

Too cute! And also sexy too. lol. Good work.

Hi Haley!
As usual, I love your stories, but I do have a few specific comments:

1.) It's difficult to conceive of a humanoid species living on a planet without any bodies of water anywhere-maybe you could say that all of the water was underground, or that people used water for purely practical purposes (such as drinking and agriculture) and did not engage in swimming as a cultural practice.

2.) Rethink the part where Starfire shivers: she can survive in space and the Russian North without responding to the intense cold, although there are a few times in the series when she shivers in less than frigid conditions ("Stranded"). Sooooo the show contradicts itself but in the comics she has basic invulnerability to cold (unless it's for a prolonged period).

3.) Few basic editing errors (including Starfire's accidental use of contractions once or twice).

4.) Good internal monologue for Robin wrestling with his heroic vs. teenage boy instincts.

Thanks for posting and making me smile! :

AWWWW!

how sweet!

"...that even Slade could dance circles around them in an Elvis costume, completely unnoticed."
I loved a lot of things about this fic, but I think that was my favorite line.

You explained a lot of things very well-like how difficult it is to keep your hands to yourself when you are with somebody that you love but are also extremely attracted to. It was very relateable, and I think you portrayed how the two would react to those situations well.

God bless,
Rose

aww so sweet (: thanks for updating (: cant wait for next chapter

Awww I love this story!there were cute moments between rob.&star