What a close call! If John had gone with her, he would have run into Jane and Thor! Trudy may know more about John's past then she is letting on. Her advice about him not liking what he may find if he searches for his past was dead on. I think John does remember some things, like past emotions, and they are all negative. That is why he is worried what Alice will think of him if he ever recovers his past memories.

I really like Trudy. She seems like a good person for John to have in his life. Looks like Thor has arrived!

Oh My God! I love this story so much that I had to skip ahead of reviewing the other chapters and leave a review for this last chapter which hopefully won't be the last! What a cliffhanger! Please update soon! Just when it seemed like Loki and April were getting reacquainted and starting to get along so well, more tragedy struck! You are a gifted writer and I love reading both your stories so much! Please never stop writing!

I love it! They are in love! Hints of Loki are definitely there.

Aww! They are so damn cute together! It will be truly heartbreaking when Loki "returns". I wonder if he will still like to paint and appreciate art and music, when that happens. It's interesting that she has a book of Norse mythology.

Oh! Alice and John (Loki) are really falling for each other and seem perfect for each other! It's ironic that the movie they chose to see on their first date is a tragic love story that could quite possibly mirror their own tragic love story once Loki regains his true memories (which I bet will happen with Thor deciding that he must check up on him on Earth). Imagine how Alice will respond once she realizes that she is not just dating some rich artist guy, but a god! I hope Loki doesn't act like an ass.

Your OC Alice is realistic and has an adorable personality. I can see why Loki is falling for her. Can't wait to read what happens next!

Just started to read. I don't usually read Thor or Loki stories, so this is a first for me. I like your story so far.

Will this ever be updated its really good I like it sooooooo much

Yay your back! Can't wait to see where this story goes especially after she's lost so much! Excited!

YAY! You're back, and wow what a chapter! Alice is really going through a rough spot with everything going on with John/Loki and now the shop and Mary-Ann! At least she is strong enough to survive anything!

OMG you're finally back! Seriously I've been dying to know if you would come back but damn you hit me with full force. Poor poor Alice, I really do cry for her she loses the love of her life and her existence, it can't get worse now, right? I can't wait for the next update.
xoxo Alessandra ;)

I am overjoyed that you are back and finishing this wonderful and a original story. I had been very upset over your hiatus. This is without a doubt my favorite Loki fanfiction! I look forward to your next update!

Holy moly. I adore this story :3 Can't wait for more.

What an engaging story, I can't wait for more. Well done.