Where's the next chapter!

Me encanta y la manera de que se resista es que encuentre un amor que haga rivalidad con lelouch. Seria muy bueno e interesante que suzaku encuentre una persona que haga a lelouch pelear más por tener a suzaku o quizás termine igual suzaku enamorado de CC. No se sabe . Pero aquí adoro a CC porque quiere ayudar a suzaku

First saw this on AO3 in the seme!Lelouch tag (which I also inhabit ;]) but I see there are more chapters here! Hadn't gotten around to reading over there yet, though. Still only on the first chapter now, but thought I'd leave this since I might not get to read the rest of it for a while because of holidays and I wanted to at least say something. (Although was a bit unsure if I should comment here or there? Since comments are lower there. But hey, commenting here will give you 69. *coughs*)

This is a pretty delicious read. Your writing has very nice thoughtfulness in word use and descriptiveness. :) I love all the details and descriptions in this! Some vivid sensory stuff in there, and I really like that. I always like that kind of thing. Really builds the "aura" of the fic, I think and I feel you've very well presented the mood.

And Edgar the Raven on the skull? Was that a reference to "The Raven"? Because if so that's pretty awesome. ;]

Lelouch dancing! Wah... Sexy. Like, I'm surprised at myself for liking that so much even though I'm in love with Lelouch. I think I've heard this song before (should've looked it up) but even without knowing I think you've still written his dancing so well, it was easy to imagine. Knowing Sinatra's voice is a plus, but you made Lelouch move so lyrically, it was Nice.

And then BAM! Suzaku! Didn't expect him so suddenly. Hopeless Suzaku. Heh. I really, really, really love the way you're writing Lelouch. He feels like a flirtier version of canon, but that lovable domineering, complacent personality of his is there and YES! The Lelouch I love! He's just not Lelouch if he's not dominating or controlling. I see this fic started in 2012, but I don't "fandom" very well and quite honestly stopped reading CG fics so long ago because what I want/like isn't popular and I gave up trying to find needles in haystacks. And now there's this! Lelouch is DOM. Love it. I need more seme!Lelouch so bad... *sobs alone*

Now apparently Lelouch has some kind of subversive magic to prevent others from seeing him? But Suzaku somehow can even though he shouldn't? Hm~? I'm intrigued! There are some creative things happening here and I'll try to get to reading more of this. I see you haven't updated in some time, but I can understand and will read the rest of this anyway. Maybe nudge you a bit to write more? ;]

There might've been something else, but I forget... -_-;

Lelouch is so damn hot! Oh do continue this story, it's getting interesting...

Thank you for this story. I really hope you'll continue it someday. I really enjoyed Suzaku's reactions to Lelouch, and the way you implemented Gino and Euphemia into the story is great! Thank you again.

Are you gonna continue because is really good and I like it

Yes! I'm liking this. You have some good vibes for the story and please continue this.

I'm a bit sad because you keep delaying the update. Actually, terribly sad. I'm really looking forward to it, and I'm sure a lot of us readers are, so hopefully you will update soon. It'd be a shame if this wasn't continued. Good luck with your writing!

I'll hold you to that

So far, Bad Kitty has my heart racing. Dom-Lelouch can be amazing when written properly, and I trust it in your capable hands. Oh my, that scene with Lelouch and his tactics of seduction... I could use a few lessons. Cat Lelouch is a sight I'd like to see perhaps all my life. His character itself reminds me very much of a cat, your portrayal was genius. Anyway, I will be moving ahead to the next chapter as I'm kinda jumping in my seat right now with anticipation. Love this.

Let me just start of this by saying that you are the only author I have bothered to keep an eye on. Sometimes I find authors like I like but never ones like you where I go out of my way to check for updates and such. I really enjoyed the new chapter the bits between Lulu and Suzaku never failed to leave me grinning from ear to ear.I can't wait to see where you go with Lulu's relationship with Euphemia and even more then that I can't wait for an explanation to whats happening to Suzaku although I already an idea. Thanks a bunch for updating and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I reread this story again just to refresh my mind again of the plot, and it was a fresh start again. Once you read it again it makes you like it more. I really like this chapter. It was fascinating. I really love how you portrayed Lelouch. So sadistically sexy. Can't wait to find out more. Wonder what happens from now on? Until next chapter.

Go Lulu, get that ass! XD
Euphemia is so annoying!

I hope it doesnt come to you giving up writing, but as a technical rookie, i see you as a seasoned veteran and all veterans deserve rest. May your desire to write never completely leave you and i hope you look back to fanfiction every once in a while and think about all the good things that have come from this website. I hopw you never lose any of the friends that you have made on here. I cant wait for your next update and i will be counting down the days. Until then, take care ad dont feel too down about the reviews.

You're a really admirable person. While we've never met it feels as if you emotions are reflected in your work. While I and most likely your other fans will be upset by this I know it will enhance your horizons so as a reader I will do whatever I can. To be honest I've worried with pushing my critiques on writers, instead I try to positively encourage them. But I see that I have to be truthful, your writing when I first read it felt normal. It was average like the other writers, if anything I wanted it to be more fluent, to flow easily but be descriptive. Basically for it to fit, a balance. ... SORRY! I don't want to sound uptight, my writing itself has more work to be done, but when I read more stories I learn and try to improve. Your work, (I just read chapters 4-5) have shown improvement. Again I apologize as I don't have the authority to say this, but I really admire you and love your work, fujosh LuluSuza rules! A good book I recommend is "Eats, Shoots, & Leaves" by Lynne Trauss, it's on grammar!