De echo cada capitulo tiene lo suyo
Y por que una orden para matar a la sombra si no lo notaste esta legalmente MUERTO, es prácticamente un poltergeist se consideraría exorcismo no asesinato como los espectros en la biblioteca
Su cuerpo esta enterrado y alma en el infierno así que estaría controlando un abatar desde aya como un juego RPG

Lol this guy

not bad, but when reading Jinx x Raven M-rated I hoped for more futa demon hentai and less lesbo romance.

Still, pretty good.

I found this story very good and hope to see you continue it. To me, it felt like a Teen Titan episode for the adult audience. Hope to see more from you!

Please post sequel soon
Ot was finally getting good. That was not an end...

So, I've read this story a few times, and this whole concept of a warrant of execution is kind of baffling to me. I think it's because I live in the US, and have never heard of such a thing. Over here, if you kill in self-defense, yeah, you get investigated and probably put on trial, but if you were legitimately protecting your life or someone else's, odds are good you wouldn't end up in jail. This is especially true of cops, so it was even weirder to see the Commisioner claiming he wanted to get warrants for his own men. I suspect this is a European thing that translates poorly across the water.

Well, I have to say, I rather enjoyed the story.

The Jinx/Raven moments were quite nice and really the highlights when they came up. The mystery/crime was enjoyable enough but a bit excessive at times. Having the enemy being only tangible to Raven makes the rest of the Titans feel a bit useless and a number of situations felt rather pointless (the whole STAR Labs thing didn't end up mattering though the banter with Red X was ok).

If I had to make a critique though I would say the two stories just didn't really connect to each other in any meaningful way (outside of Jinx being a hostage at the end). Honestly this could have been (and kinda was) two entirely unconnected stories (The Shadow vs Jinx/Raven Romance) and would have worked as well, if not better (people who came for the Jinx/Raven having to wade through a murder/horror mystery to find their nuggets of Romance, ect...).

Still that's just a minor thing. Overall it was a very fun read from beginning to end.

I had totally forgotten about this pair and decided to revisit some familiar stories. This story was so enjoyable and i love this pairing so much thanks to you!

Kinda surprised that Jason didn't make some smart ass cryptic comment about his 'favorite' brother

I love this story so far, though, I think the word you were going for in the third to last paragraph is coincidence, not consequence. If not, I apologise, it just makes more sense if it were.

That, sounds like a really good idea for a date. Hrm. Too bad that all the water that's deep enough for swimming around here is either dirty, or on private property.

This was absolutely amazing and every bit as good as the first version and far more! I truly loved this one and I hope to see more amazing things from you. A part of me is thinking that amazingness, from your writing style and skill, is pretty much guaranteed, but I think that I'll wait until I start reading before singing your praises.

Thank you for writing this. I absolutely love it and wonderful things like this are what keeps me going.

I read the line "I knew this vent cover would have a use if I kept it!" and it just about blew my mind. Not only was it because it's something the hopeless packrat part of me would do, it's just plain hilarious! I'm gonna finish this one before I comment again, but I must say that, while the first version was good, this one was absolutely excellent! :)

Not as sappy and certainly a more foreboding ending than last time around but still awesome, I look forward to the sequels

I decided to wait Intill the end to review anyway this story was fantastic. The ending wasn't a flop, I personally liked the end (I can actually tolerate cliffhangers) anyway the only problem I have with this story is that I was briefly addicted to reading it (Well that, video games, and my girl but eh Im kinda glad that I have atleast one of my addictions out of the way.) Good Job. I'll read the sequel as its posted and I'll review from the start this time. Sorry from the novel but for once I actually manage to write a lot more than necessary.
-AmericanMinerva.